since I was a child,I have always been dreaming of becoming a police and i doing my best to study hard to make my dream to come true.Wanting to become a cop really is very deffcult,it requires all the specil skills of the profession.but the police help me to protect and help everyone.hope taht a child's dream like me can soon come true.
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Since I was a child, I always have been dreaming to become a policeman and I tried my best to study hard to make it comes true. It is not easy to do it because it requires a lot of special skills in profession but the policeman protect us, who also bring a peaceful world for us so I will not give up. I hope that my dream will come true soon.