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In recent years, travel has become a broad issue to the general public. Many people claim that the international tourism is the bad thing in their country. There are a number of reasons behind this view and several solutions should be adopted by the government and individuals to boost the situation.

On the one hand, there are two primary reasons why the international tourism is the bad thing in their country. The first reason is that many tourists hurt tourism. For example, tourists throw garbage rash in Sam Son beach. The second reason is that many tourists wear shorts, miniskirt and disturb order when they go to the temple. In addition, children are affected by their way dressed.

 On the other hand, several measures could be taken to prevent this problem. The first solution would change negative attitude by the local people. For example, If countries have many tourists, it will experience a phenomenal growth of the economy. A second measure would be the government should transmit for residents about both developed economy and a boost to tourism. Besides that, tourist also creates jobs for us. Furthermore, travel agencies recommend that tourists should respect their traditional culture. For instance, tourists are responsible for garbage.

In conclusion, it is clear that there are various reasons for the international tourism is the bad thing in their country and steps need to be taken to tackle this problem.
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