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There are many things that symbolize the Vnese culture such as bamboo, ao dai, and rich cuisine. It is impressed for foreigners to make differences in each country.

 

First of all, the conical leaf hat of VN has some physical features. To make a pretty conical leaf hat, the worker must choose meticulously among kinds of coconut and soft palm leaves. According to their experience, they believe that the hat made of coconut leaves can not be more delicate and more refined than made of palm one. The hat has a conical form. The diameter of the hat is from 45 cm to 50 cm and it is from 25 to 30 high. The form is covered by leaves around the ribs and the rim. Finally, the hat is painted with a coat of a attar oil.

 

Secondly, the leaf hat not only protects them from the sun and the rain but it also an object which is as part of the national spirit. Therefore, many foreigners enjoying taking a leaf hat as a special souvernirs from VN. Moreover, the leaf hat helps the girls to enhance the femininity and simplicity of the women.

 

Last but not least, the use and the preservation is also very important. Users should not leave their leaf hat near hot fire or in the sun for a long time. Thanks to the hat which made from leaf, it is very flammable. In addition, regularly clean will make it keep the cone long lasting.

 

Inconclusion, as a symbol of the Vnese woman, the leaf hat is attached to both material and spirit.... (mấy bạn giúp mình phần kết bài với)
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Nowadays' life, Viet Nam is one of the oldest culture countries in the world. There are many things such as bamboo, ao dai and rich cuisine, but I think that conical leaf hat which symbolize the culture of Viet Nam is impressed foreigners. In this essay, I will decribe it and give the its advantages.    

First of all, the conical leaf hat of VN has some physical features. To make a pretty conical leaf hat, The worker must choose meticulously among kinds of coconut and soft palm leaves to create a pretty conical leaf hat . According to their experience, they believe the hat which is made of coconut leaves can not be more delicate and more refined than made of palm one. The hat has a conical form. The diameter of the hat is from 45 cm to 50 cm and it is from 25 to 30 high. The form is covered by leaves around the rib and the rim. Finally, the hat is painted with a coat of a attar oil.

Secondly, the leaf hat not only protect us from the sun and the rain but also an object which is a part of the national spirit. Therefore, many foreigners enjoy taking a leaf hat as a special souvernirs from VN. Moreover, the leaf hat helps women to enhance the femininity and simplicity of the women.

Last but not least, the use and the preservation is also very important. Users should not leave their leaf hat near hot fire or in the sun for a long time. The hat which made from leaf is very flammable. In addition, if we clean it regularly, it will be kept the cone long lasting.

In conclusion, the conical leaf hat is a symbol of Viet Nam culture. So, we must conserve and grow it.

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Like Ao dai, Non-La is also considered as a symbol of VNese woman. In this essay, I would like to present its physical features and its use.

On the one hand,  the conical leaf hat of VN has some physical features. Firstly, It is made from a special kind of bamboo and soft palm leaves. According to the workers' experience, the hat which is made from palm leaves is always nicer and more delicate.Secondly, The hat has a conical form. The diameter of the hat is from 45 cm to 50 cm and it is from 25 to 30 high. The form is covered by leaves around the riand the rim. Thirdly, the hat is painted with a coat of an attar oil. Fourth, the hat is usually jas a color silk strap spanning to strap holders to hold the hat when it is used. Finally, it is also decorated with images of the country that makes the strong impression on foreign tourists so they want to travel to VN.

 

On the other hand, the thing that makes Non La special is its use. Not only, Non La protects us from the sun and the rain but it is also a part of the national spirit. In addition, there is no surprise for foreigners see that women wear Non la as a supplement, typically with the Ao dai. No one can deny that Non la makes women look nicer and more gentle. Therefore, many tourists enjoy buying a leaf hat as a special souvenir of VN.

In conclusion, the conical leaf hat is a symbol a VN culture. So we must conserve and grom it

 


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