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I often think about what are the most important thinks in my life. I think family is really the only thing I actually have and I believe they are the most important and I really adore my family. However, instead of writing about my family, I will write about the most important objects in my life. The three most important objects in my life right now are my laptop, my flute, and my favorite books.
I've had a laptop for 4 years. It's very important to me. My monitor always shares the information about my class on the Facebook, so I need my laptop to know necessary information. Besides, it's the most expensive thing in many things, I bring them from my house to my boardhouse.
I love my flute very much. It's my most treasured possession. I've had my flute since I was at grade 8. The flute is a musical instrucment of thw woodwind family. Although I don't know how to play it, it's really precious to me. Because it was a present from my grandfather, I love him very much. Whenever I see it, it reminds me of him.
Books are one of my life and reading books has definitely been my favorite hobby. I read many kind of books, but I was impressed by the self-help books. My first self-help book is "I am gifted, so are you!" by Adam Khoo. My mother bought it for me when I was a student of a junior high school. Then, I bought some self-help books such as: "How to win Friends and Influence People" by Dale Carnegie, "Awaken the giant within" by Anthony Robbins, and so on. I think a good book does not just give us the feelings of excitement but also help with forming our emotions, positive attitude, being ready to face up all the challenges of life, so I'll treasure it forever.
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I often think about what are the most important thinks->thoughts in my life. I think family is really the only thing I actually have and I believe they are the most important and I really adore my family. However, instead of writing about my family, I will write about the most important objects in my life. The three most important objects in my life right now are my laptop, my flute, and my favorite books.
I've had a laptop for 4 years. It's very important to me. My monitor always shares the information about my class on the Facebook, so I need my laptop to know necessary information. Besides, it's the most expensive thing in many things, I bring them from my house to my board house.
I love my flute very much. It's my most treasured possession. I've had my flute since I was at grade 8. The flute is a musical instrument of the woodwind family. Although I don't know how to play it, it's really precious to me. Because it was a present from my grandfather, I love him very much. Whenever I see it, it reminds me of him.
Books are one of my life and reading books has definitely been my favorite hobby. I read many kinds of books, but I was impressed by the self-help books. My first self-help book is "I am gifted, so are you!" by Adam Khoo. My mother bought it for me when I was a student of a junior high school. Then, I bought some self-help books such as: "How to win Friends and Influence People" by Dale Carnegie, "Awaken the giant within" by Anthony Robbins, and so on. I think a good book does not just give us the feelings of excitement but also help with forming our emotions, positive attitude, being ready to face up all the challenges of life, so I'll treasure it forever.

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