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Recently, many significant technological products has been invented and has influence in different aspects. Then, they has changed the interaction of human a lot and bring both advantages and disadvantages.

It can be seen clearly that technology gives people a great deal of convenience in communication. First of all, employers and employees are allowed to have conferences with each other or with their partners which are far away without moving on a long distance. Also, contracts and documents can be sended from a company to another one or between collegues through electronic faxes and e-mail box. Secondly, technology helps learners to study with their teachers at home by such app as Messenger, Skype or Viber to save time, money and energy using to go to school. Moreover, students easily connect with each other to discuss about their homework and share lessons to better their study more effectively. Then, it enables people to interact with their family, their friends and relative more constantly while staying home through social network.

On the other hand, technology also brings drawback to its users. Using such equipments as smart phone, computer or tablet for a long time may harm human's health very much. Next, people spend more time interacting and making friends in front of a screen than going out and do that. This makes relationships between people become fuzzy. Furthermore, technology influences sharply to sorts of relations of people as it discourages us to chat face-to-face with others. Therefore, we can not know how our loved ones' feeling are and whether other people treat us by all their heart.

In conclusion, technology has affected interaction between people in a positive way, but it will change the way we interact with each other into bad as well if we do not know how to use it for only benefits.
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Recently, many significant technological products has been invented and has influence in different aspects. > ..... which has a great impact on different aspects of life. 

which are far away without moving on a long distance > lủng củng quá, ko sửa đc

 sended > sent 

at home > even when they stay at home.

 

by such app as > by many apps such as ...

 

loved > beloved 

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