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In this day and age,there is a considerable opposition between the rapid development of society and awareness as well as the behaviour of people towards surroundings.There is an undeniable fact that people are being more insensitive to their fellow and events happening around them.To clarify this controversial issue I will present my view point and some current situations.

First and foremost,their insensitivity can be shown clearly through their attitudes towards animals.In this aspect,trading and slaughtering animals for money or pleasure is the most typical example.In recent surveys,there is an enormous increase in the number of animals dying from being transported and processed after being anesthetized to be produced as main feature to take pleasure for designing as fur coat or medical treatment such as Rhino horns even decorating like ivory.All those actions have denounced that people are gradually putting animal's existence in jeopardy and the main reason for this situation can be known to be their greediness and ambition for money along with huge profit earned from this action.

In addition,people's indifference is sometimes performed through their reaction to other people especially when they are in trouble.For instance,people nowadays choose to neglect beggars instead of giving them help.Another example,they tend to gather around and take photos about accidents on streets in lieu of stopping driving and helping send them to hospital as soon as possible.

Last but not least,people have the inclination to litter whenever and wherever they like which they tend to consider to be convenient and taking less time without realizing that they are directly destroying their own environment which can do harm to their health.According to the latest statistics,averagely every day there are approximately more than million of tons of trash and sewage pumped into lakes and dams and then flown into the ocean that kills the marine life and devastate the marine ecosystem.

In conclusion,those serious problems are objectively caused by many factors but the main reason might be people's awareness.Therefore,to enhace this we should raise our awareness in order to avoid suffering from damages in the future and improving our society to be better.
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n this day and age,there is a considerable opposition between the rapid development of society and awareness as well as the behaviour of people towards surroundings.There is an undeniable fact that people are being more insensitive to their fellow and events happening around them.To clarify this controversial issue I will present my view point and some current situations.

First and foremost,their insensitivity can be shown clearly through their attitudes towards animals.In this aspect,trading and slaughtering animals for money or pleasure is the most typical example.In recent surveys,there is an enormous increase in the number of animals dying from being transported and processed after being anesthetized to be produced as main feature to take pleasure for designing as fur coat or medical treatment such as Rhino horns even decorating like ivory.All those actions have denounced that people are gradually putting animal's existence in jeopardy and the main reason for this situation can be known to be their greediness and ambition for money along with huge profit earned from this action.

In addition,people's indifference is sometimes performed through their reaction to other people especially when they are in trouble.For instance,people nowadays choose to neglect beggars instead of giving them help.Another example,they tend to gather around and take photos about accidents on streets in lieu of stopping driving and helping send them to hospital as soon as possible.

Last but not least,people have the inclination to litter whenever and wherever they like which they tend to consider to be convenient and taking less time without realizing that they are directly destroying their own environment which can do harm to their health.According to the latest statistics,averagely every day there are approximately more than million of tons of trash and sewage pumped into lakes and dams and then flown into the ocean that kills the marine life and devastate the marine ecosystem.

In conclusion,those serious problems are objectively caused by many factors but the main reason might be people's awareness.Therefore,to enhace this we should raise our awareness in order to avoid suffering from damages in the future and improving our society to be better.

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