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Over the past few decades , the world are revolutionised with computerisation . Therefore , the government is trying to bring the computer into education . Although computers can help   students  to gain  a wide range of knowledge ,  many people think that student are gradually  depend   on computers  for their study may have some negative effects . From my observation and my point of view , i believe that the disagvantages of it outweigh the advantages . 

To begin with , the benefits  of using computerare  are widely admitted .  As a high-tech tool , computers can provide students with diversified method to learn more efficiently. They can get many news in every part of the world , some of which can draw many lessons from and avoid it . Besides, the  computer  is the place where students can help themselves to gather a lot of information through many websites designed for studying online with teachers or exchanging their experience and knowledge in studying by video call  , which supports them to absorb knowledge effectively with good spirit in a lively atmosphere . 

On the other hand, students are far too on computers  for their study . Firstly , they  are tend to rely too much on computers to search for available information instead of thinking by themselves . Secondly ,  remember that  students are  children who  are still lack of self-control , so they are likely to be addicted to computers, video game is a particular example . Being exposed to computers but not for studying  is not only wasting their time which can  be used to do many thing but also  can lead students to be tempted to play games  and lose their intesrest in studying . Furthermore , their perspective and knowledge about real world are not developed well if they deep into virtual world ,which seriously affects and destroy their future . Thirdly ,although they have a good purpose , using computers for long hours has  both physical and psychological effects such as short-sighted and  memory reduction . .

In conslusion , despite the negative effects , studying on computers can bring many benefit for students who wisely know how to take advantage of it . However, students should be encouraged to use computer daily to enhance knowledge while taking precaution in order not to affect their health . 

 

 

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Over the past few decades , the world are revolutionised with computerisation . Therefore , the government is trying to bring the computer into education . Although computers can help   students  to gain  a wide range of knowledge ,  many people think that student are gradually  depend   on computers  for their study may have some negative effects . From my observation and my point of view , i believe that the disagvantages of it outweigh the advantages . 

To begin with , the benefits  of using computerare  are widely admitted .  As a high-tech tool , computers can provide students with diversified method to learn more efficiently. They can get many news in every part of the world , some of which can draw many lessons from and avoid it . Besides, the  computer  is the place where students can help themselves to gather a lot of information through many websites designed for studying online with teachers or exchanging their experience and knowledge in studying by video call  , which supports them to absorb knowledge effectively with good spirit in a lively atmosphere . 

On the other hand, students are far too on computers  for their study . Firstly , they  are tend to rely too much on computers to search for available information instead of thinking by themselves . Secondly ,  remember that  students are  children who  are still lack of self-control , so they are likely to be addicted to computers, video game is a particular example . Being exposed to computers but not for studying  is not only wasting their time which can  be used to do many thing but also  can lead students to be tempted to play games  and lose their intesrest in studying . Furthermore , their perspective and knowledge about real world are not developed well if they deep into virtual world ,which seriously affects and destroy their future . Thirdly ,although they have a good purpose , using computers for long hours has  both physical and psychological effects such as short-sighted and  memory reduction . .

In conslusion , despite the negative effects , studying on computers can bring many benefit for students who wisely know how to take advantage of it . However, students should be encouraged to use computer daily to enhance knowledge while taking precaution in order not to affect their health . 

 

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Over the past few decades , the world are revolutionised with computerisation . Therefore , the government is trying to bring the computer into education . Although computers can help   students  to gain  a wide range of knowledge ,  many people think that student are gradually  depend   on computers  for their study may have some negative effects . From my observation and my point of view , i believe that the disagvantages of it outweigh the advantages . 

To begin with , the benefits  of using computerare  are widely admitted .  As a high-tech tool , computers can provide students with diversified method to learn more efficiently. They can get many news in every part of the world , some of which can draw many lessons from and avoid it . Besides, the  computer  is the place where students can help themselves to gather a lot of information through many websites designed for studying online with teachers or exchanging their experience and knowledge in studying by video call  , which supports them to absorb knowledge effectively with good spirit in a lively atmosphere . 

On the other hand, students are far too on computers  for their study . Firstly , they  are tend to rely too much on computers to search for available information instead of thinking by themselves . Secondly ,  remember that  students are  children who  are still lack of self-control , so they are likely to be addicted to computers, video game is a particular example . Being exposed to computers but not for studying  is not only wasting their time which can  be used to do many thing but also  can lead students to be tempted to play games  and lose their intesrest in studying . Furthermore , their perspective and knowledge about real world are not developed well if they deep into virtual world ,which seriously affects and destroy their future . Thirdly ,although they have a good purpose , using computers for long hours has  both physical and psychological effects such as short-sighted and  memory reduction . .

In conslusion , despite the negative effects , studying on computers can bring many benefit for students who wisely know how to take advantage of it . However, students should be encouraged to use computer daily to enhance knowledge while taking precaution in order not to affect their health . 

 

 

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