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A good citizen no longer commiting crimes after being released from prison is believed to be the perfect person to persuade teenagers to avoid the life of crime and i agree with this statement.

First of all, good members of a community who were once criminals have vital experience that can be shared with teenagers. Talking with these people, the young generation will know the consequences of crimes as well as the purnishments for each. Not only do these conversations advise listeners how to become good citizens but they also are warnings for those who have a tendency to follow the way of crime.

Another importance speaking to good citizens with criminal past is lessons that it renders teenagers. After spending time in prison, some will learn meaningful things about life and have a chance to show teenagers what they learned. Hopefully, like reading a novel, listeners can be able to understand and learn something from it, especially in the aspect of morality.

Last but not least, people who sucessfully got out of the depth of crime are indeed good examples. They are the ones who succeeded in one of the most hardest tasks of society which is ending committing crimes and good guidance for teenagers to the bright future.

In conclusion, these people are not simply released from prison but also released from their guilt and darkness of their life, which many people find it hard to do . Therefore, they are not only the best advisers and teachers in helping teenagers be good citizens but also a solution to make the world a better place.
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A good citizen no longer commiting crimes after being released from prison is believed to be the perfect person to persuade teenagers to avoid the life of crime and i agree with this statement.

First of all, good members of a community who were once criminals have vital experience that can be shared with teenagers. Talking with these people, the young generation will know the consequences of crimes as well as the purnishments for each. Not only do these conversations advise listeners how to become good citizens but they also are warnings for those who have a tendency to follow the way of crime.

Another importance speaking to good citizens with criminal past is lessons that it renders teenagers. After spending time in prison, some will learn meaningful things about life and have a chance to show teenagers what they learned. Hopefully, like reading a novel, listeners can be able to understand and learn something from it, especially in the aspect of morality.

Last but not least, people who sucessfully got out of the depth of crime are indeed good examples. They are the ones who succeeded in one of the most hardest tasks of society which is ending committing crimes and good guidance for teenagers to the bright future.

In conclusion, these people are not simply released from prison but also released from their guilt and darkness of their life, which many people find it hard to do . Therefore, they are not only the best advisers and teachers in helping teenagers be good citizens but also a solution to make the world a better place.
 

 

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A good citizen no longer commiting crimes after being released from prison is believed to be the perfect person to persuade teenagers to avoid the life of crime and i agree with this statement.

First of all, good members of a community who were once criminals have vital experience that can be shared with teenagers. Talking with these people, the young generation will know the consequences of crimes as well as the purnishments for each. Not only do these conversations advise listeners how to become good citizens but they also are warnings for those who have a tendency to follow the way of crime.

Another importance speaking to good citizens with criminal past is lessons that it renders teenagers. After spending time in prison, some will learn meaningful things about life and have a chance to show teenagers what they learned. Hopefully, like reading a novel, listeners can be able to understand and learn something from it, especially in the aspect of morality.

Last but not least, people who sucessfully got out of the depth of crime are indeed good examples. They are the ones who succeeded in one of the most hardest tasks of society which is ending committing crimes and good guidance for teenagers to the bright future.

In conclusion, these people are not simply released from prison but also released from their guilt and darkness of their life, which many people find it hard to do . Therefore, they are not only the best advisers and teachers in helping teenagers be good citizens but also a solution to make the world a better place.^^^^^^

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