There are two main culprits of being stressful among teenagersNowadays, a large number of teenagers are stressed for 2 reasons . Firtsly ( Secondly) ( hoặc bạn có thẻ dùng To begin with, và nguyên nhân thứ 2 bạn dung Next, )The very first reason stems from studying pressure. Every school year, students must cover a wide range of subjects from Math, Literature,…( không được dùng dấu...... nha bận, những môn học này mình phải hoa hả bạn? mình nghĩ bạn không cần liệt kê môn học ra , vì hình như ai cũng rõ khi đề cập đến subjects " í kiến của mình thôi nhé cũng ko rõ nữa nếu sai bạn góp ý giúp miinh) to Painting, and Music. They are hoped ( nói chung rất hạn chế dùng quá khứ trong bài viết academic, vì đây la tinh hình thuc tiễn chung, nên mình chỉ nói ở hiện tại ) always try to achieve at least acceptable results in all areas, which is even a challenging task for adults. Therefore, they could frequently be poorly- performed in some( mình thấy bạn dùng từ some hơi bị nhiều) subjects, and gain bad scores, provoking negative emotions such as unconfidence, shy and then stress. Besides studying tensions, unfamiliar environment also has a considerable influence on causing stressful among youth. Due to parents changing their jobs or residence, teenagers could have to change their living and studying environment. New neighbourhood, new schools, and new friends are likely to make them feel like a fish out of water meanwhile their parents are spending a lot of time ( bạn ko nên dung a lot of mà nen dùng many hoặc much tùy thuộc nó uncount or count hoặc một số cụm khác ) making arrangement in working and have no time to share with children. That is why many newcomer pupils experience loneliness, which can result in committing suicide.
However, there are some possible answers to how to reduce juvenile’s stress( bạn nên hạn chế sử dụng cụm There is/there are :bạn có thể thêm vao cuối câu cho nó hay hơn) .. First of all, school education ( minh nghi school or education) should shed the light for students that noone is perfect and bad marks in some aspects does not ( do not) mean they would not succeed in the future. There have been many examples of celebrities who did not performed well in schools but still received great respects, such as Edison, Einstein. In past, many talent scientists who did not perform well but they still received great respects, such as Edison, Einstein.The second responsibility is on parents when trying to limit changing environment. If requiredEssentilly, parents should spend more time at home with children, they need to spend more their care on children’s feelings and thoughts, hence, reducing their loneline.
In conclusion, being stressful is clearly gaining more land in young people due to some particular reasons. However, if schools and parents could realise its importance and apply solutions, this problem could be addressed.
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