Hi Tuan Anh
just some thoughts and recommendation
Online communication has had a tremendous impact on our life (lives). Face-to-face contact is being replaced by Facebook,Twitter. so on I think that this revolution outweigh (outweighs) the (its) disadvantages.
There are several reason (reasons) why i (I) believe that there are more the benefits than the drawbacks. It is noticeable that we can keep in touch with people who is (are) far away from you such as old friend (friends) or accquaintences (acquaintances). By using social media as a contacting tool, we have ability to bring together through videocall (video call), voice chat. Furthermore, we are now able to maintain a friendship easily (efficiently) as well as avoid feeling alone when living independently without meeting each other . This benifit (benefit) of social media makes it much more profitable and convenient .
Online contact generated the new age of advertising.There are many companies which have to paid (pay) a lot of money to their advertisment (advertisement) campaigns on television without success. Whereas, is (it) is easier to introduce productions on facebook (Facebook). For example, as long as your post is attractive enough. Your (, your) introduction (advertisement) will be known by many people which means you can make a profit from social media. As a result , this revolution has totally changed the way that many enterprises work.
In conclusion , online communication plays an (a) vital role on/(in) the world-at-large. We ought to pioneer its advantages and reduce negative impacts