The users of social media, such as Facebook, Twitter, are replacing face-to-face contact in this century. Do you think the advantages of this way outweigh the disadvantages?
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Social media has long been regarded as the technological innovation in the mordern world. Today, people tend to spend most of their time on social media and the way they interact with the whole community may be altered. The following essay will discuss the pros and cons of this phenomenon in depth.

 

To begin with, depending too much on mass media may not totally free from drawbacks. The primary problem is that lacking some essential skills such as communication and problem solving may result from this tendency. To be more precise, when addicted to social media, people may lose their interaction with the genuine world. As the certain result, people may have difficulties in expressing their mind and emotion. On the other hand, this trend may also lead to the meaningless life in the long run. In other world, hardly can people realize the true meaning of their life without life experiences that virtual world cannot bring to them. Hence, although social media is the great innovation with many convenience but it cannot replace the role of face-to-face conversation.

 

It is, however, evident that the mass media also brings enormouse benefits for us if used properly. Firstly, media plays the vital role in helping people keep up with the wheel of life. In fact, thanks to technological innovations as social media, people may not get into trouble with the unceasing change in the fast changing world. Besides, social media has the ability to bridge the gap between people. To be more specific, with these innovations, people can communicate with each other in easier ways regardless of distance so that they can mantain long distance relationship. Therefore, if using social media with adequate awareness, people can receive many advantages from them.

 

To sum up, all things contain within them both merits as well as drawbacks and social media is not the exception but it seems that the disadvantages may far outweigh its advantages. No matter what innovations appear, they cannot change the traditional method people use to communicate to each other. 

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