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In the age of globalization,it is important to maintain cultural identity.Firstly,we should preserve native language.Language is a vital part of culture.It enables people to communicate to family and community members.Languge helps us develop intellectual abilities and shape cultural identity.Secondly, we should wear traditonal clothes because it not only reflects climatic conditions but also represents national identities.moreover,we should celebrate traditional holidays.it brings people together.last but not least, eating traditional food is a good way for us to preserve our cultural identity.That people eat traditional food helps to strengthen cultural ties.therefore,we should keep our own cultural identity and flexibly adjust to the different culture.

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In the age of globalization,it is important to maintain cultural identity.Firstly,we should preserve native language.Language is a vital part of culture.It enables people to communicate to family and community members.Languge helps us develop intellectual abilities and shape cultural identity.Secondly, we should wear traditonal clothes because it not only reflects climatic conditions but also represents national identities. Moreover, we should celebrate / Celebrating traditional holidays is a good idea to protect the beauty of tradional culture and brings people together. Furthermore, it will be an effective way for advertising cultural identity to others .Last but not least, eating traditional food not only is a good way for us to preserve our cultural identity but also helps to strengthen cultural ties. Therefore,we should keep our own cultural identity and flexibly adjust to the different culture.

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