It is commonly believed that people have distinct pesonality, but among of them have many common points are similar (lỗi diễn đạt) humans hard-wired to imitate each other, so. They tend to purchase similar clothes and other commodities. I totally agree with the idea for some reasons.
( Thiếu câu topic sentence) People usualy have tendency to duplicate people around. Firstly, companies have a tendency to copy characteristics of products made by their competitors when they see the (chỉ dùng the cho các danh từ xác định) potential potentials (không thêm s) of those goods. For example, Samsung often produces smartphones which is similar to those of Apple, in terms of function and outward appearance. One of the main reasons explanations (lỗi dùng từ)is that if Samsung Company did (lỗi dùng từ, ngữ pháp) do not copy Apple’ products Corporation, their mobile phones could hardly attract customers’ attention, and this could lead to the low rate of consumption. Therefore, a great number of individuals have cellphones from different brands, but theirs have some same characteristics . ( đoạn này không logic)
Secondly, I suppose that a big number of people citizens (từ vưng không phù hợp) want to buy similar goods which were used by their Idol or celebrities(lỗi diễn đạt) the same goods with celebrities. Obviously, despite having a deep understanding about products, ordinary people, particularly youngsters, seem to spend much money on purchasing those which are advertised by their idols ( lỗi diễn đạt) since they consider that sharing things with duplicate style of their idols has special meanings. For instance, make-up products that were made by Maybelline in co-operation with Gigi Hadid - a well-known model were out of stocks immediately after they had been launched. ( dùng câu dài, mắc lỗi ngữ pháp, đưa vd quá cụ thể dẩn đến người đọc không hiểu) The main cause lead to the situation justification of that situation ( lỗi dùng sai từ, và diễn đạt) is that Hadid’s fans would have a sense of satisfaction when buying things connected to the idol or Hadid her.
In conclusion, I would restate that humans are likely to imitate each other, which is shown in the popularity of fashion and other commodities.
Bài viết của bạn viết nhiều câu dài dẩn đến sai lỗi ngữ pháp, cố dùng đa dạng từ mới dẩn đến đoạn văn viết đọc rất lạ và dẩn đến sai ngữ pháp và từ vựng dùng không đúng ngữ cảnh. Đoạn thân bài ý bạn là một nhưng viết bạn lại diễn đạt sai théo nghĩa ngược lại "" the same goods with celebrities. Obviously, despite having a deep understanding about products, ordinary people, particularly youngsters, seem to spend much money on purchasing those which are advertised by their idols ""