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The regulated tests , such as IELTS and TOEFL are turning into a precondition to pupil's further accomplishment. It is widely believed that the importance of those tetst is blocking student's power to experience learning. I'm strongly convinced with that. <br>
Không nên viết tắt I'm, và cấu trúc đúng là convinced of
I am strongly convinced of that statement/I am strongly convinced of that opinion.
Standardized tests do not cover many skills that parents want their children to develop while at school, including teamwork, creativity, how to ask good questions, how to persist with difficult projects, and how to apply skills to real-world challenges. --> Theo mình thì ko nên thay đổi từ danh từ "teamwork, creativity" sang "how...". You can write
Standardized tests do not cover many skills that parents want their children to develop while at school, including teamwork, creativity, persistence when facing challenges, application of skills on real-world problems, and so on.