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In this modern days , with the development of technologies  , there are many ways for us to get information through such as internet and television  ,which has made great changes in education . However , when it comes to impact knowledge on students , many people still think that the traditional education system is more useful . In my personal opinion , i firmly believe that the teachers play a more significant role in classroom .

Firstly , teachers are seemed to be inspirers , they can stimulate student's interests and it is an undeniable fact that interests will create a motivation for them to learn more and more . They stand by us anytime when we have questions ,  answer it more clearly and we will  more focused on the lessons .  Instead a student studying by himself through Internet and television is easily lose his interest . They may can get bored and are distracted by many websites such as Facebook and Youtube . Secondly , teacher is always the person who understand his student's level more than a computer . They know the ability and the weak points of students  by giving exercises and check them regularly  ,therefore, they will  find a faster and simplier method to make us comprehend the information easier . Besides , teachers can not only inculcate theoretical knowledge to sudents but also enhance many social skills such as communication and behaviors  . In addition, what makes teachers different from computers is their emotion and conscience . They will the person for us to confide in when we sad , they teach us many moral lessons and open new eyes for us to see the world more beautifully . Furthermore , teachers also serves as a guide for students by showing the path , encourage them when they fail and correct their misunderstandings . They will instruct you step by step  in many practical subjects and help us learn more about it .

In conslusion , there is no doubt that Internet and television are very educative but these day with a ocean of knowledge students need teachers to learn more and steadily .
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In this modern (days > modern life, modern technology or modern society) , with the development of technologies  , there are many ways for us to (get information through > obtain information) such as internet and television  ,which (has động từ theo sau bởi chủ từ số nhiều > have) made great changes in education . However , when it comes to (impact knowledge on students > impact chung chung > the impact on students' knowledge) , many people still think that the traditional education system is more useful . In my personal opinion , i( I luôn luôn viết hoa) firmly believe that the teachers play a more significant role in classroom (cụ thể hơn: than ?) .

Firstly , teachers are seemed to be inspirers(inspirational people) , they can stimulate student's interests and it is an undeniable fact that (the) interests will create a motivation for them to learn more and more . They stand by us anytime when we have (any) questions ,  answer it more clearly and we will (be) more focused on the lessons .  (Instead > otherwise, additionally) a student studying by himself(or herself) through Internet and television is(bỏ tobe) easily lose his interest . They(đang nói tới A student, his..) may can get bored and are distracted by many websites such as Facebook and Youtube . Secondly , The teacher (danh từ chung chung giáo viên) is always the(a cụ thể) person who understand(understands) his(her) student's level more than a computer . They know the ability and the weak points of students  by giving exercises and check them regularly  ,therefore, they will  find a faster and simplier method to make us comprehend the information easier . Besides , teachers can not only inculcate (+ in) theoretical knowledge to students but also enhance many social skills such as communication and behaviors  . In addition, what (ngầm hiểu: what are the things) make teachers different from computers is(are) their emotion and conscience . They will (be) the person(those ones) for us to confide(support) in when we sad(are in trouble or get stuck) , they teach us many moral lessons and open new eyes for us to see the world more beautifully . Furthermore , teachers also serves(serve) as a guide for students by showing the path , encourage(encouraging) them when they fail and correct their misunderstandings . They will instruct you step by step  in many practical subjects and help us learn more about it .

In conslusion , there is no doubt that Internet and television are very educative but these days with a ocean of (huge) knowledge. Students need teachers to( learn more and steadily > learn steadily)

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In this modern days , with the development of technologies  , there are many ways for us to get information through such as internet and television  ,which has made great changes in education . However , when it comes to impact knowledge on students , many people still think that the traditional education system is more useful . In my personal opinion , i firmly believe that the teachers play a more significant role in classroom .

Firstly , teachers are seemed to be inspirers , they can stimulate student's interests and it is an undeniable fact that interests will create a motivation for them to learn more and more . They stand by us anytime when we have questions ,  answer it more clearly and we will  more focused on the lessons .  Instead a student studying by himself through Internet and television is easily lose his interest . They may can get bored and are distracted by many websites such as Facebook and Youtube . Secondly , teacher is always the person who understand his student's level more than a computer . They know the ability and the weak points of students  by giving exercises and check them regularly  ,therefore, they will  find a faster and simplier method to make us comprehend the information easier . Besides , teachers can not only inculcate theoretical knowledge to sudents but also enhance many social skills such as communication and behaviors  . In addition, what makes teachers different from computers is their emotion and conscience . They will the person for us to confide in when we sad , they teach us many moral lessons and open new eyes for us to see the world more beautifully . Furthermore , teachers also serves as a guide for students by showing the path , encourage them when they fail and correct their misunderstandings . They will instruct you step by step  in many practical subjects and help us learn more about it .

In conslusion , there is no doubt that Internet and television are very educative but these day with a ocean of knowledge students need teachers to learn more and steadily .

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