In this modern (days > modern life, modern technology or modern society) , with the development of technologies , there are many ways for us to (get information through > obtain information) such as internet and television ,which (has động từ theo sau bởi chủ từ số nhiều > have) made great changes in education . However , when it comes to (impact knowledge on students > impact chung chung > the impact on students' knowledge) , many people still think that the traditional education system is more useful . In my personal opinion , i( I luôn luôn viết hoa) firmly believe that the teachers play a more significant role in classroom (cụ thể hơn: than ?) .
Firstly , teachers are seemed to be inspirers(inspirational people) , they can stimulate student's interests and it is an undeniable fact that (the) interests will create a motivation for them to learn more and more . They stand by us anytime when we have (any) questions , answer it more clearly and we will (be) more focused on the lessons . (Instead > otherwise, additionally) a student studying by himself(or herself) through Internet and television is(bỏ tobe) easily lose his interest . They(đang nói tới A student, his..) may can get bored and are distracted by many websites such as Facebook and Youtube . Secondly , The teacher (danh từ chung chung giáo viên) is always the(a cụ thể) person who understand(understands) his(her) student's level more than a computer . They know the ability and the weak points of students by giving exercises and check them regularly ,therefore, they will find a faster and simplier method to make us comprehend the information easier . Besides , teachers can not only inculcate (+ in) theoretical knowledge to students but also enhance many social skills such as communication and behaviors . In addition, what (ngầm hiểu: what are the things) make teachers different from computers is(are) their emotion and conscience . They will (be) the person(those ones) for us to confide(support) in when we sad(are in trouble or get stuck) , they teach us many moral lessons and open new eyes for us to see the world more beautifully . Furthermore , teachers also serves(serve) as a guide for students by showing the path , encourage(encouraging) them when they fail and correct their misunderstandings . They will instruct you step by step in many practical subjects and help us learn more about it .
In conslusion , there is no doubt that Internet and television are very educative but these days with a ocean of (huge) knowledge. Students need teachers to( learn more and steadily > learn steadily)