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Students at schools and universities learn more from lessons with teachers than from others sources (such as the Internet or television). To what extend do you agree or disagree?

In this modern days , with the development of technologies  , there are many ways for us to get information through such as internet and television  ,which has made great changes in education . However , when it comes to impact knowledge on students , many people still think that the traditional education system is more useful . In my personal opinion , i firmly believe that the teachers play a more significant role in classroom .

Firstly , teachers are seemed to be inspirers , they can stimulate student's interests and it is an undeniable fact that interests will create a motivation for them to learn more and more . They stand by us anytime when we have questions ,  answer it more clearly and we will  more focused on the lessons .  Instead a student studying by himself through Internet and television is easily lose his interest . They may can get bored and are distracted by many websites such as Facebook and Youtube . Secondly , teacher is always the person who understand his student's level more than a computer . They know the ability and the weak points of students  by giving exercises and check them regularly  ,therefore, they will  find a faster and simplier method to make us comprehend the information easier . Besides , teachers can not only inculcate theoretical knowledge to sudents but also enhance many social skills such as communication and behaviors  . In addition, what makes teachers different from computers is their emotion and conscience . They will the person for us to confide in when we sad , they teach us many moral lessons and open new eyes for us to see the world more beautifully . Furthermore , teachers also serves as a guide for students by showing the path , encourage them when they fail and correct their misunderstandings . They will instruct you step by step  in many practical subjects and help us learn more about it .

In conslusion , there is no doubt that Internet and television are very educative but these day with a ocean of knowledge students need teachers to learn more and steadily .
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In this modern (days > modern life, modern technology or modern society) , with the development of technologies  , there are many ways for us to (get information through > obtain information) such as internet and television  ,which (has động từ theo sau bởi chủ từ số nhiều > have) made great changes in education . However , when it comes to (impact knowledge on students > impact chung chung > the impact on students' knowledge) , many people still think that the traditional education system is more useful . In my personal opinion , i( I luôn luôn viết hoa) firmly believe that the teachers play a more significant role in classroom (cụ thể hơn: than ?) .

Firstly , teachers are seemed to be inspirers(inspirational people) , they can stimulate student's interests and it is an undeniable fact that (the) interests will create a motivation for them to learn more and more . They stand by us anytime when we have (any) questions ,  answer it more clearly and we will (be) more focused on the lessons .  (Instead > otherwise, additionally) a student studying by himself(or herself) through Internet and television is(bỏ tobe) easily lose his interest . They(đang nói tới A student, his..) may can get bored and are distracted by many websites such as Facebook and Youtube . Secondly , The teacher (danh từ chung chung giáo viên) is always the(a cụ thể) person who understand(understands) his(her) student's level more than a computer . They know the ability and the weak points of students  by giving exercises and check them regularly  ,therefore, they will  find a faster and simplier method to make us comprehend the information easier . Besides , teachers can not only inculcate (+ in) theoretical knowledge to students but also enhance many social skills such as communication and behaviors  . In addition, what (ngầm hiểu: what are the things) make teachers different from computers is(are) their emotion and conscience . They will (be) the person(those ones) for us to confide(support) in when we sad(are in trouble or get stuck) , they teach us many moral lessons and open new eyes for us to see the world more beautifully . Furthermore , teachers also serves(serve) as a guide for students by showing the path , encourage(encouraging) them when they fail and correct their misunderstandings . They will instruct you step by step  in many practical subjects and help us learn more about it .

In conslusion , there is no doubt that Internet and television are very educative but these days with a ocean of (huge) knowledge. Students need teachers to( learn more and steadily > learn steadily)

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