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Bài ielts task 2 - Some people believe that living in big cities becoming more difficult. others believe that it is getting easier. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

There are different views about how is the life in modern cities. Almost people know that big city is where you can see many vehicles, many skyscrapers and many people. Although some argue that city life too hard to live, others, myself included, believe that big cities’s life creates more opportunities.
On the one hand, some support the review that city life is not easy. It is commonly believed that work is a main source of stress for most people in big cities. With the high unemployment rate and job security is becoming less and less guaranteed. As a result, this make the city life have more troubles. Furthermore, high living costs and congestion are the factors lead to the negative thinking about urban area. As a consequence, after stressful time of work, these things contribute to increased fatigue.
On the other hand, I agree with those who believe that living in big cities makes more chances. Firstly,  urban dweller often have opportunities to build and develop their career and business with a huge market.  Despite of competitiveness, talent people leave no stone unterned in there. Secondly, Medical service and Education are positive factors. Residents of urban area are easily approaching to modern medical service which do not have in rural area and the children are learned in good condition institutions especially foreign language improvement.  Finally, with a diverse entertainment make those who live there feel more comfortable and have a vast number of choices to relax.
To conclude with, my own view is that life is hard wherever you live so do not miss the boat with living in the big cities.

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There are different views about how is the life in modern cities. Most people know that big city is where you can see many vehicles, many skyscrapers and many people. Although some argue that city life is too hard to live, others, myself included, believe that big cities’s life creates more opportunities. 
On the one hand, some support the view that city life is not easy. It is commonly believed that work is the main source of stress for most people in big cities. With the high unemployment rate and job security is becoming less and less guaranteed. As a result, this makes the city life have more troubles. Furthermore, high living cost and congestion are the factors lead to the negative thinking about urban area. As a consequence, after stressful time of work, these things contribute to increased fatigue. 

On the other hand, I agree with those who believe that living in big cities makes more chances. Firstly,  urban dwellers often have opportunities to build and develop their career and business with a huge market.  Despite of competitiveness, talented people leave no stone unturned in there. Secondly, Medical service and Education are positive factors. Residents of urban area are easily approaching to modern medical service which do not have in rural area and the children are learning in good condition institutions especially foreign language improvement.  Finally, with a diverse entertainment make those who live there feel more comfortable and have a vast number of choices to relax. 
To conclude with, my own view is that life is hard wherever you live so do not miss the boat with living in the big cities.

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đã góp ý 22 Tháng 11 bởi pmk123bp (17 điểm)
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There are different views about how the life in modern cities is. Almost people think that big city is a place where you can see many vehicles, many skyscrapers and many friendly people and so on. Although some people argue that city life is too hard for them to live, others, myself included, believe that big cities’s life creates more opportunities. 
On the one hand, some people support the viewpoint that city life is not easy. It is commonly believed that work is a main source of stress for most people living in big cities.In the day and age, the high unemployment rate and job security is becoming less and less guaranteed. As a result, this makes the city life have more troubles. Furthermore, high living costs and congestion are also factors lead to the negative thinking about urban area. As a consequence, after stressful time of work, these things contribute to increasing fatigue. 
On the other hand, I agree with those who believe that living in big cities makes more chances. Firstly,  urban dweller often have much opportunities to build and develop their own career as well as business with a huge market.  In spite of competitiveness, talent people leave no stone unterned in there. Secondly, Medical service and Education are positive factors. Approaching to modern medical service are no longer limited to residents of urban areas which do not have in rural area and the children have more chances to learn in good condition institutions especially foreign language improvement.  Finally, with a diverse entertainment make those who live there feel more comfortable and have a vast number of choices to relax. 

To conclude with, my own view is that life is hard wherever you live so do not miss the boat with living in the big cities.

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đã góp ý 22 Tháng 11 bởi Đinh Thị Huyền My (13 điểm)
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