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Describe your favorite pet

My pet is a cat named Tuc Tung. She is an adorable brown cat that has a few black spots spread across her body and tail. She has a very gentle face and is always friendly to me, but wary of strangers. Tuc Tung is well equipped with sharp claws, teeth, reflexes and instincts of a hunter. Besides, She craves attention most of the time because she is scared of being abandoned or ignored. No longer ago, I found her wondering in our suites and then I took her to our room to live with us.

Tuc Tung is an emotional pet. She loves many things. She love lying on the carpet, she loving playing and especially, eating is the most. Whenever she is worried or hungry, he looks at us with desperate eyes that appear like she is sad and beg us to feed her. And you know, one can always observe the way his eyes light up with excitement whenever she see food. Haha, that’s exactly a lickerish cat. And then, with a full stomach and have a surf of power, Tuc Tung would be like a crazy guy, she run and jump everywhere, she scrape the wall, bite the paper and do something like that. Tuc Tung is playful. She can chase the red dot of a laser pointer forever, or shadows of your hands on the wall.

She follows me everywhere, she has the sweetest heart ever, beautiful little girl. Funny thing is, when she wants to play with us, she would grab my hand with her teeth like she is biting but she will never bite down on my hand. She sleep all day while we are out, and Tuc Tung love to play with us when we are at home

After all, I see Tuc Tung an cutest angle. Tuc tung, you know plays an important role in my life as my daughter, Ah ha! She is also an excellent morning alarm clock
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I thinks 'and' are used to connect 2 things,  2 clause, or 2 simple sentences. "She has a very gentle face and is always friendly to me", beside after "to" usually is a infinitive verb.

"he looks...... " what??????? she looks

 "and do something like that."--- and ---> or

"Funny thing is, when she wants to play with us, she would grab my hand with her teeth like she is biting but she will never bite down on my hand." should '.' after 'us' and ',' after 'but'

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