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The internet is probably the most significant invention of the last 30 years. Without it, our lives would be completely different.To what extent do you agree or disagree?

  Internet has become one of the most vital parts in our lives and it is considered as the most significant invention of the last 30 years. Someone said that our lives would be completely different without it. I don’t totally agree with this statement because it can be true for many people but not for others.

   I can’t deny the importance of Internet in our daily lives. It plays a central role in so many aspects of modern life. For education, it helps us to get more information to improve our knowledge. Instead of waiting to ask our teachers or friends, we can search the web to find keys. It provides us a good approach to self-study. Moreover, we can use the Internet to communicate with each other using things like email or Facebook, Twitter,… For example, when we want to communicate with our friends and families, we do not need to spend much time going to their home. By accessing an email or other forms of social networking site for a moment, we enable to contact with them. Futhermore, we can use the Internet for work, for leisure and even for shopping. To sum up, the Internet is becoming more and more important in our modern lives.

  Although the Internet is useful and essential for people, it is not for all. Nowadays, our lives are gradually developing but in some areas, people here are still poor. Their lives are lack of many things so the Internet is probably luxury for them. However, there are things they need more than the Internet. Its use can’t help anything for their lives. For example, someone invented a device that purify polluted water for people who live near polluted place or river. That is what the Internet can’t do. Moreover, without it, the life of human keeps going on happily and peacefully. For instance, there is a place where people don’t use the Internet. Local people are still happy and friendly. They meet face to face each other so often; therefore they can remain their good relationship among the community. In short, for some people, the Internet can’t change their lives despite its benefits.

  In conclusion, we can’t underestimate the significance of the Internet. For many people, it would change their lives completely and make them better. And for others, there are things that are more significant. So these are reasons why I don’t totally with that statement.   Internet has become one of the most vital parts in our lives and it is considered as the most significant invention of the last 30 years. Someone said that our lives would be completely different without it. I don’t totally agree with this statement because it can be true for many people but not for others.

   I can’t deny the importance of Internet in our daily lives. It plays a central role in so many aspects of modern life. For education, it helps us to get more information to improve our knowledge. Instead of waiting to ask our teachers or friends, we can search the web to find keys. It provides us a good approach to self-study. Moreover, we can use the Internet to communicate with each other using things like email or Facebook, Twitter,… For example, when we want to communicate with our friends and families, we do not need to spend much time going to their home. By accessing an email or other forms of social networking site for a moment, we enable to contact with them. Futhermore, we can use the Internet for work, for leisure and even for shopping. To sum up, the Internet is becoming more and more important in our modern lives.

  Although the Internet is useful and essential for people, it is not for all. Nowadays, our lives are gradually developing but in some areas, people here are still poor. Their lives are lack of many things so the Internet is probably luxury for them. However, there are things they need more than the Internet. Its use can’t help anything for their lives. For example, someone invented a device that purify polluted water for people who live near polluted place or river. That is what the Internet can’t do. Moreover, without it, the life of human keeps going on happily and peacefully. For instance, there is a place where people don’t use the Internet. Local people are still happy and friendly. They meet face to face each other so often; therefore they can remain their good relationship among the community. In short, for some people, the Internet can’t change their lives despite its benefits.

  In conclusion, we can’t underestimate the significance of the Internet. For many people, it would change their lives completely and make them better. And for others, there are things that are more significant. So these are reasons why I don’t totally with that statement. 

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