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Write an essay about the benefit of reading book

In today's modern world , media development has many influenced in human's life .People have lots of sources to get information and take entertainment through such as internet, television and radio.Therefore, reading book is gradually fell into oblivion , but  no one can deny the benefit of it

Firstly , reading book helps us to widen our knowlegde .Everythingyou  read fills your head with a bit of information ,you  never know when it might be in handy , but the more knowlegde you know , the better-equipped you are to tackle any challenges you will face to  .Nowadays , not only does reading books bring free entertainment but also cost  less money than taking a trip .  Just lying on the couch and reading books could help us get information  focus on our own fileds as well as the others  such as science , literature and biology. Reading books seems to be  the best way to  absorb the world's knowlegde and enrich out understanding .

Secondly , reading book improves your memory . While reading, we  finding the things to memorize , day by day our brain become very active and easily store lots of information . Furthermore , when reading a book , all of you attention is focued on the story , you are attracted by small details in the  story. This habit will enhance our ability to concentrate at school , at work . That will help we realize the value in life or immoral lesson hidden in books , behavior properly and have a positive outlook in life .Besides , reading books helps us to develop out expression ability like writing and speaking . The writing style of some out favourite author will affect our styles  and we will have a chance to try and enhance writing skills , learn new words ,which can be  used in to better out essay .Moreover , logical , analytical thinking skills and mental stimulation are also enhanced .
In conclusion , reading books is so important and have many benefits . It  not only help us become more clever but also brings many happiness . Therefore , everyone should be encouraged to read books as much as possible .
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In today's modern world , media development has many influenced in human's life .People have lots of sources to get information and take entertainment through such as internet, television and radio.Therefore, reading book is gradually fell into oblivion , but no one can deny the benefit of it

Firstly , reading book helps us to widen our knowlegde .Everything you read fills your head with a bit of information, you never know when it might be in handy , but the more knowlegde you know , the better-equipped you are to tackle any challenges you will face to.Nowadays, not only does reading books bring free entertainment but also cost less money than taking a trip. Just lying on the couch and reading books could help us get information  focus on our own fileds as well as the others such as science, literature and biology. Reading books seems to be  the best way to absorb the world's knowlegde and enrich out understanding .

Secondly , reading book improves your memory . While reading, we finding the things to memorize , day by day our brain become very active and easily store lots of information . Furthermore , when reading a book , all of you attention is focued on the story , you are attracted by small details in the story. This habit will enhance our ability to concentrate at school, at work. That will help we realize the value in life or immoral lesson hidden in books , behavior properly and have a positive outlook in life .Besides , reading books helps us to develop out expression ability like writing and speaking . The writing style of some out favourite author will affect our styles and we will have a chance to try and enhance writing skills , learn new words ,which can be  used in to better out essay .Moreover , logical , analytical thinking skills and mental stimulation are also enhanced .
In conclusion , reading books is so important and have many benefits . It  not only help us become more clever but also brings many happiness . Therefore , everyone should be encouraged to read books as much as possible .
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In today's modern world , media development has many influence in human's life .People have lots of sources to get information and take entertainment through such as internet, television and radio.Therefore, reading book is gradually fell into oblivion , but no one can deny the benefits of it.

Firstly , reading book helps us to widen our knowlegde .Everything you read fills your head with a bit of information that you never know when it might be in handy. The more knowlege you know, the better-equipped you are to tackle any challenges you face to. Nowadays, not only does reading books bring us free entertainment but also costs less money than taking a trip. Just lying on the couch and reading books could help us get information and focus on your own fields as well as the others such as science, literature and biology. Reading books seems to be  the best way to  absorb the world's knowlegde and enrich our understanding .

Secondly, reading books improves your memory . While reading, we can find useful things to memorize, day by day our brain become very active and easily store lots of information. Furthermore , when reading a book , all of your attention is paid to the content, you are attracted by small details in the  story. This habit will enhance our ability to concentrate at school and at work. That will help us realize the values in life or immoral lessons hidden in books, behave properly and have a positive outlook in life .Besides , reading books helps us to develop our expression ability like writing and speaking. The writing styles of our favourite authors will affect our styles and we will have a chance to try and enhance writing skills, learn new words ,which can be used to better our essays. Moreover, logical and analytical thinking skills and mental stimulation are also enhanced .
In conclusion, reading books is so important and has many benefits . It not only help us become more clever but also brings many happinesses. Therefore, everyone should be encouraged to read books as much as possible .
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