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Vegetables are the best things you can eat

In today's modern world, vegetables are play an important role in human life. There are lot of nutrive vaults that are extremely good for our health. However, people can not only eat vegetables in their daily meals. There are reasons why we need to eat other things diffirent vegetables which are mentioned below.

First of all, vegetables can not provide nutritions enough for our body's activities. Kind of meats such as pork, beef, lamd, etc that provide energies to people can work continuously a long time. For example, children are very active and curious, they need lot of energies for their daily activity such as study, discover or even run, walk, dance, draw, etc. In contrast, some people believe that vegetables are the most essential and vital food for our life.


In fact, although the meats provide the natritive that vegetables can not, but we can live completely without this. Some people can not eat meat, because of their religion. They think that if they do not eat meat, they will have a heathy life and live very long time. Another benifit of vegetables is that are really good for our health, there are bring lot of advantages such as balance blood pressue, improve our face skins as well as body skins and prevent some diseases as obesity, cancer, heart disease etc. There are reasons why vegetables are necessary to our life.

In my opinion, we should to eat both the vegetables and the meats. When we have enough energies and heaths, we can enjoy all of our life. For example, if we have health, we can visit other countries, try new sport, and look after our family.

All in all, vegetables are needful and important for our life. People need to eat vegetables to improve their health and have energies to enjoy our life.

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In today's modern world, vegetables are play an important role in human life. There are lotof nutrive vaults that are extremely good for our health. However, people can not only eat vegetables in their daily meals. There are some reasons that why we also need to eat other kind of foods things diffirent vegetables which are mentioned below. 

First of all, vegetables can not provide nutritions enough for our body's activities. Kind of meats such as porks, beefs, lamd lambs, etc that provide energies to people can work continuously for a long time. For example, children are very active actively and curious, they need lots of energies for their daily activity such as study, discover or even run, walk, dance, draw, etc. In contrast, some people believe that vegetables are the most essential and vital food for our life.


In fact, although the meats provide the natritive that vegetables can not, but we can live completely without this. Some people can not eat meat, because of their religion. They think that if they do not eat meat, they will have a heathy healthy life and live for a very long time. Another benifit of vegetables is that they are really good for our health. There They are bring lots of advantages: such as balance blood pressue, improve our face skins as well as body skins and prevent some diseases as obesity, cancer, heart disease etc. There These are some reasons that why vegetables are necessary to our life. 

In my opinion, we should to eat both of the vegetables and the meats. When If we have enough energies and heaths healthy, we can enjoy all of our life. For example, if we are healthy have health, we can visit other many countries, try new sport, and look after our family. 

All in all, vegetables are needful and important for to our life. People need to eat vegetables to improve their health and have energies to enjoy our life.

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In today's modern world, vegetables are play an important role in human life. There are lot of nutrive vaults that are extremely good for our health. However, people can not only eat vegetables in their daily meals. There are reasons why we need to eat other things diffirent vegetables which are mentioned below. 

First of all, vegetables can not provide nutritions enough for our body's activities. Kind of meats such as pork, beef, lamd, etc that provide energies to people can work continuously a long time. For example, children are very active and curious, they need lot of energies for their daily activity such as study, discover or even run, walk, dance, draw, etc. In contrast, some people believe that vegetables are the most essential and vital food for our life.


In fact, although the meats provide the natritive that vegetables can not, but we can live completely without this. Some people can not eat meat, because of their religion. They think that if they do not eat meat, they will have a heathy life and live very long time. Another benifit of vegetables is that are really good for our health, there are bring lot of advantages such as balance blood pressue, improve our face skins as well as body skins and prevent some diseases as obesity, cancer, heart disease etc. There are reasons why vegetables are necessary to our life. 

In my opinion, we should to eat both the vegetables and the meats. When we have enough energies and heaths, we can enjoy all of our life. For example, if we have health, we can visit other countries, try new sport, and look after our family. 

All in all, vegetables are needful and important for our life. People need to eat vegetables to improve their health and have energies to enjoy our life.

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