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write letter of request to explain with your manager and inquire him/her recruit more partner for company

Dear Sir/ Madam,

        I am writing to inquire about some solutions concerning workload in office. And I really expect from your generosity and consideration about my letter of explaining the issue in company.

       Currently, I am responsible for the position of my colleagues as well as my workload has become increasingly heavy because of the resignation of co-worker. As a result, I am coming with up working overtime every night. This may explain reason why I lack of time to spend as well as take care of my family, friends even myself. Working early and overnight give rise to health problems, especially, I have stomachache. This could eventually leads to increased stress, hence I am not ability to concentrate on both working efficiently and my baby care.

        With all of the excuses above, I sincerely request for an extra-payment for my effort in working tirelessly at off-duty hours. Furthermore, I would be pleased if you could arrange me another partner in replace of vacancy to support and share the work with me. And if you would like to recruit more people for company, I will be glad to help you find the best candidate to suitable with work for you and of course, I still guarantee that my all assignments will be completed successfully.

       Lastly, I hope that my request will not inconvenience you too much. I would be great appreciation for your valuable time to consider my letter.

I look forward to receiving you reply as soon as possible. Thank you in advance for your kind coorperation.

                                                                                   Yours faithfully,

                                                                                           Quyên

                                                                                      Lê Thị Quyên .
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I am writing to inquire about some solutions concerning workload in office. And I really expect from your generosity and consideration about my letter of explaining the issue in company.

       Currently, I am responsible for the position of my colleagues as well as my workload has become increasingly heavy because of the resignation of co-worker. As a result, I am coming with up working overtime every night. This may explain reason why I lack of time to spend as well as take care of my family, friends even myself. Working early and overnight give rise to health problems, especially, I have a stomachache. This could eventually lead to increased stress, hence I am not ability to concentrate on both working efficiently and my baby care.

        With all of the excuses above, I sincerely request for an extra-payment for my effort in working tirelessly at off-duty hours. Furthermore, I would be pleased if you could arrange me another partner in replace of vacancy to support and share the work with me. And if you would like to recruit more people for company, I will be glad to help you find the best candidate to suitable with work for you and of course, I still guarantee that my all assignments will be completed successfully.

       Lastly, I hope that my request will not inconvenience you too much. I would be great appreciation for your valuable time to consider my letter.

I look forward to receiving your reply as soon as possible. Thank you in advance for your kind cooperation.

Theo bạn, bài viết này được bao nhiêu "chấm" ?
đã góp ý 8 Tháng 11 bởi doanquoctai612 (45 điểm)
bạn ơi cho mình hỏi ý của bài viết như vậy đã ổn chưa bạn?
(đây là thư formal nhé)
thanksss bạn
Dear Mr.Micheal,

           I am writing this letter to apply for the job in UK in an international magazine, which I saw this advertisement on New York Times website.

           As outlined in my curriculum vitae, which I have enclosed, I was awarded a bachelor’s degree in English translation and interpretation from University of Languages and International Studies (ULIS)_ Viet Nam national University, Ha Noi. Hence I am confident that my English is suitable for your demand.

          Moreover, after graduation I worked for Hoa Hoc Tro newspaper as well as Dep magazine… And I also used to be a baby-sitter for small children aged 5- 7. In addition to, I was an admin at youth and volunteer teenagers club of ULIS, and many other clubs I had took part  in include: doing team-work or organizing events and activities for my university.

         Currently, I am employed as an assistant at SmartCom center, where my responsibilities include teaching children and celebrate some games for students

          I believe that I would be an ideal candidate for job you have outlined with my high experience about methods of taking care of children as well as manage something. Furthermore, everyone always gives me complement that I am a humorous, friendly and enthusiastic person as well as hard-working. Many clubs and organizations gives me certification and merit which I attach in my CV.

      I enclosed my curriculum vitae and photograph as required, and I would be appreciate  a reply at your earliest convenience. Thank you for considering my application and I am willing to attend an interview at any time.
                                                                                                         Yours faithfully,

                                                                                                              Quyên

#bạn ơi chữa hộ mình bài này nữa nhé.... đề bài là cover letter about this job which you see the advertisement
really thank you bạn

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