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An important person who has influenced my life in most positive way is my mother. Nothing in the world can compare with the true love and care of my mother. She is not only my mother but also my friend and my great teacher. She taught me how to be brave, honest and kind to everyone. She also showed me how to give and take. Although she is very busy, she always spares her time for her family. She is always the first one to get up and prepare breakfast for us. She is the first person to come up my mind and movatie whenever I have  difficulties. In conclusion, I always consider my mom as the most perfect woman in the world and I do want to say ''I love you, mom. I can't live without you!''
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An important person who has influenced in my life in most positive way is my mother. Nothing in the world can compare with the true love and the care of my mother. She is not only my mother but also my friend and my great teacher. She taught me how to be brave, honest and kind to everyone. She also showed me how to give and take. Although she is very busy, she always spares her time for her family. She is always the first one to get up and prepare breakfast for us. She is the first person has to come up my mind and movatie whenever I have to cope with difficulties. In conclusion, in my heart always consider my mom as the most perfect woman in the world and I do want to say ''I love you, mom. I cannot live without you!''

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