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Some people believe that anyone can create art such as painting, poetry, music and so on. Others think that a person should have special abilities to create art.

Some people believe that anyone can create art such as painting, poetry, music and so on. Others think that a person should have special abilities to create art. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

 

People have different views about whether the talents or anyone can produce work of arts. From my perspective, art is created by those who fall in love with it.

At the outset, there are some reasons why numerous people claim that art is a subject for the talents. Firstly, inside knowledge is required for creating work of arts. Visual arts, for exmaple, require artists have a deep insight into a rich variety of other arts such as drawing, painting and sculpture that individuals cannot do it easily. Secondly, a number of special skills are necessary for those to generate arts. People play with clay but to form a statue is a combination of imagination, creation and skills that a gifted person can produce it.

Despite of aforementioned arguments, I believe that producing arts is for anyone who would like to express their thoughts and passions. My argument can be analyzed though the fact that thousands of work of arts have been created everyday in many parts of the world by people at any age. Since art is really just the creation of something in life, anything people can come up with in their mind can become a piece of artwork. In addition, the idea that artistic ability is an inherent trait would be wrong. It is a learned skill just like any other kind of work. Anyone can generate art, and anyone can become a highly skilled artist if they are able to devote enough practice, ethusiasm and concentration on the task.

In conslusion, although some people argue that talented people can produce work of arts, I believe that art is an activity for anyone.
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I think you should change some phrases such as “fall in love” into more academic ones. “Fall in love” in my point of view is more suitable for Speaking skill. My advice is that you can learn more vocabulary related to the topic of “Nature or Nurture”. You can search on google there are many useful phrases you can use. All of us should expand our vocabulary you know

However your essay is generally good, it is really clear and easy to understand. I
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People have different views about whether the talents gifted or anyone can produce work of arts. From my perspective, art can be created by anyone who fall in love with it.

At the outset, there are some reasons why numerous people claim that art is a subject for the talented talents. Firstly, insider indept knowledge is required for creating work of arts. Visual arts, for exmaple, requires artists to have a deep insight into a rich variety of other arts such as drawing, painting and sculpting sculpture that individuals cannot do it easily. Secondly, a number of special skills are necessary for those to who generate arts. People Anyone can play with clay but to forming a statue is a combination of imagination, creation and skills that only a gifted person can produce it.

Despite of aforementioned arguments, I believe that producing arts is for anyone who would like to express their thoughts and passions. My argument can be analyzed though the fact that thousands of work of arts have been created everyday in many parts of the world by people at any age. Since art is really just is simply the creation of something in life, anything that people can come up with in their mind can become a piece of artwork. In addition ,as far as I am concerned, the idea that the only way of gaining artistic abilities is are an inhering trait would be wrong, is incorrect. It is a learned skill just like any other kind of work. Anyone Everyone can generate art, and anyone can become a highly skilled artist if they are able to devote enough practice, ethusiasm and concentration on the task.

In conslusion, although some people argue that only talented people can produce work of arts, I believe that art is an activity for anyone who enjoys it.

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