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I have a lot of friends but my best friend is Anh. She is one of the classmates. We have known each other since we were 6 years old. She has a short black hair and it is straight. Her lips is small but it's very beautiful. Her eyes is very affectionately. She is tall and thin. She is very kind and and generous. She spends her free time doing volunteer work at a local orphanage but she is a hard working student who always gets good grades. Unlike me, she likes sports very much. She plays badminton very good. I am very pleased to have such a kind and understanding friend like here. I wish our friendship will last forever. 

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I have a lot of friends but my best friend is Anh. She is one of the my classmates. We have known each other ever since we were 6 years old. She has straight short black hair She has a short black hair and it is straight. Her lips is small but they're very absolutely stunning beautiful. Her eyes is are very affectionately. She is tall and thin. She is very incredibly kind and and generous. She spends her free time doing volunteer work at a local orphanage but while being she is a hard working student who always gets good grades. Unlike me, she likes sports very much. She plays badminton very good. I am very pleased to have such a kind and understanding friend like here. I wish our friendship will last forever. 

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"I have a lot of friends, but my best friend is Anh. She is one of the classmates. We have known each other since we were six years old. She has a short black hair, and it is straight. Her lip is small, but it is very beautiful. Her eyes are very affectionately. She is tall and thin. She is very kind and generous. She spends her free time doing volunteer work at a local orphanage, but she is a hard-working student who always gets good grades. Unlike me, she likes sports very much. She plays badminton very good. I am very pleased (delighted) to have such a kind and understanding friend like here. I wish our friendship will last forever"

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I have a lot of friends but my best friend is Anh, who . She is one of the classmates. We have known each other since we were 6 years old. She has a short black hair and it is straight. Her lips is small but it's very amazingly beautiful while her eyes is very affectionately. She looks is tall and thin, and her traits She is are very kind and and generous. She spends her free time on doing volunteer work at a local orphanage but she is an hard working industrious student who always usually gets good grades in my class. Unlike me, she likes sports very much. She plays badminton very good. I am very pleased to have such a kind and understanding friend like here. I wish our friendship will last forever. 

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