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I had the flight to Singapore two months ago. I fly to travel twice a year. Singapore is the seventh country I come. But it was second times I had been there. I visisted my sister who is a oversea student. Because of the storm at night, my flight was delayed 10 hours, so I had to come back airpior in the early next morning. There were so many people at check in that we had to queue for ages. I always chose a window seat , so that I could see everything outside such as sky, cloud, mountain, river and some countrys that made me comfortable and interested.When the plane flied over the Andes , which I didn't enjoy and the cabin crew told the passengers to put their seat belts on. EspecialIy, I was served some food and drink that were delicious. It took about 35 hours which was so long. I got really bored. Whenever I took long-haul flights I always suffered from jet lag because of the time difference and I felt tired for several days. When the plane took off, I thought that I didn't suffer anymore . I was in high spirits to see my sister. After that, that she tooks me some interseting and famous places which was near her house made me seem like to forget at all.
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I had the flight to Singapore two months ago. I fly to travel twice a year. Singapore is the seventh country I come. But it was second times I had been there. I visited my sister who is an oversea student. Because of the storm at night, my flight was delayed 10 hours, so I had to come back airport in the early next morning. There were so many people at check-in that we had to queue for ages. I always chose a window seat, so that I could see everything outside such as sky, cloud, mountain, river and some countries that made me comfortable and interested.When the plane flew over the Andes, which I didn't enjoy and the cabin crew told the passengers to put their seatbelts on. Especially, I was served some food and drink that were delicious. It took about 35 hours which was so long. I got really bored. Whenever I took long-haul flights I always suffered from jet lag because of the time difference and I felt tired for several days. When the plane took off, I thought that I didn't suffer anymore. I was in high spirits to see my sister. After that, that she tooks me some interesting and famous places which were near her house made me seem like to forget at all.

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