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Dangerous sport

Some people think that governments should ban dangerous sports, while others think people should have freedom to do any sports or activity. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

It is true that scores of people think the extreme sports should be forbidden by the government. While some people suppose that playing sports or doing exercise is their freedom right, I would argue that individuals should be free to choose any sports according to their hobby.

On the one hand, there are those  who believe that the authority should forbid hazardous sports. Firstly, an inhibition of adventure sports protects sportsmen from accidents lurking around them. Generally, dangerous sports are chosen by youngsters who may not have the ability to predict some unexpected situation that pose a threat to our life when they participate these sports. Secondly, the government restrict people to extreme sports is a good way to help individuals to save an amount of money. Indulging in some extreme sports can turn out to be quiet expensive. People have to pay a great amount of money for insurance cost, training course and protective equipment. Instead of spending an enormous money to extreme sports, people might use their money to some benefical activity such as charity, saving for the future and investment.

On the other hand,  I side with those who believe that individuals have autonomy to do any sports according to their wishes. The main reason is that so-called extreme sports are not as dangerous as people think. There are some clear regulations and safety procedures helping to reduce the possibility of accidents. People take part in some extreme sport have to undergo appropriate training to amass their knowledge about the dangerous sports and hone their skills before playing these sports. Beginners are not allowed to dive solo, they have to be accompanied with experienced professional. Furthermore, almost equipment and technology used in the dangerous sports from motor racing to mountain climbing constantly improve to minimize the risk of unwanted accidents.

In conclusion, although both the government should ban dangerous sports and people have a freedom to practice dangerous sport are advantageous in their own ways, it seems to me that it is better to people should have a chance to play the extreme sports.
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Some people think that governments should ban dangerous sports, while others think people should have freedom to do any sports or activity. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

It is true that scores of people think the extreme sports should be forbidden by the government. While some people suppose that playing sports or doing exercise is their freedom right, I would argue that individuals should be free to choose any sports according to their hobby.

On the one hand, there are
those  who believe that the authority should forbid hazardous sports. Firstly, an inhibition of adventure sports protects sportsmen from accidents lurking around them. Generally, dangerous sports are chosen by youngsters who may not have the ability to predict some unexpected situation that pose a threat to our life when they participate these sports. Secondly, the government restrict people to extreme sports is a good way to help individuals to save an amount of money. Indulging in some extreme sports can turn out to be quiet expensive. People have to pay a great amount of money for insurance cost, training course and protective equipment. Instead of spending an enormous money to extreme sports, people might use their money to some benefical activity such as charity, saving for the future and investment.

On the other hand,  I side with those who believe that individuals have autonomy to do any sports according to their wishes. The main reason is that so-called extreme sports are not as dangerous as people think. There are some clear regulations and safety procedures helping to reduce the possibility of accidents. People take part in some extreme sport have to undergo appropriate training to amass their knowledge about the dangerous sports and hone their skills before playing these sports. Beginners are not allowed to dive solo, they have to be accompanied with experienced professional. Furthermore, almost equipment and technology used in the dangerous sports from motor racing to mountain climbing constantly improve to minimize the risk of unwanted accidents.

In conclusion, although both the government should ban dangerous sports and people have a freedom to practice dangerous sport are advantageous in their own ways, it seems to me that it is better to people should have a chance to play the extreme sports.

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