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To: Silverbuilding@gmail.com 

Subject: Request a room information

Dear Ms. Silver,

I am writing to enquire about your vacancies, as my friend and I are looking for an apartment which is well-planned for our student life.  We searched in the Internet about your rooms and would be grateful if you could tell us some following details about rooms availability. 

We would like to find out a room which has two-bedroom because of wanting to be priviate space. In your advertisements, I saw that your building are obvious near our school and we are both feel fortuitous about that. Besides, I wonder if you could provide the room, water and electric power costs as well as payment method.  I also want to know how amenities it is, such as equipped kitchen utensils, air-condition, refrigerator, sofa, LCD TV, microwave-oven, and Internet ready to use. 

I'm looking forward to receiving your reply.

Best regards,

Nguyen Thanh Hang

 

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To: Silverbuilding@gmail.com 

Subject: Request a room information

Dear Ms. Silver,

I am writing to inquire about your vacancies, as my friend and I are looking for an apartment which is well-planned for our student life.  We searched in the Internet about your rooms and would be grateful if you could tell us some following details about rooms availability. 

We would like to find out a room which has two-bedroom because of wanting to be live in a priviate space. In your advertisements, I saw that your building are obvious near our school and we are both feel fortuitous about that. Besides, I wonder if you could provide the adequate information about room, water and electric power costs as well as payment method.  I also want to know how amenities it is, such as equipped kitchen utensils, air-condition, refrigerator, sofa, LCD TV, microwave-oven, and Internet ready to use. 

I'm looking forward to receiving your reply/to hearing from you soon.

Best regards,

Nguyen Thanh Hang

 

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