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IELTS Task 1 19/7 - HCM city - Modern Life

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The charts below show the reasons why people travel to work by bicycle or by car.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.

These pie charts illustrate the category of several factors influencing people make choice coming to workplace between by bike cycle and by car.

In the first glance, in the pie chart Reasons for cycling to workplace, there were the highest proportions derived from the factors health and fitness and less pollution (60% totally), while comfort was the most dominant factor making people choose coming to workplace by car (about 40%).

Moreover, about 14% of citizens thought that driving was faster than clycling, whereas the reverse idea just occupied 12%. Totally 25% of citizens select cycle to workplace because of some problems derived from owning a car were parking and costs that compared to the proportion of nearly 50% come from some conveniences of driving were safe, carring many things and capacity for going far.

In general, it could be seen that nowadays more and more citizens consider to the their influences on environment and health, however traveling by car also have several conveniences for those who travel long distances.

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These pie charts illustrate the category of several factors affect people make choice coming to workplace between by bike cycle and by car.

In the first glance, in the pie chart Reasons for cycling to workplace, there were the highest proportions derived from the factors health and fitness and less pollution (60% totally), while comfort was the most dominant factor making people choose coming to workplace by car (about 40%).

Moreover, about 14% of citizens thought that driving was faster than clycling, whereas the reverse idea just occupied 12%. Totally 25% of citizens select cycle to workplace because of some problems derived from owning a car were parking and costs that compared to the proportion of nearly 50% come from some conveniences of driving were safe, carring many things and capacity for going far.

In general, it could be seen that nowadays more and more citizens consider to the their influences on environment and health, however traveling by car also have several conveniences for those who travel long distances.

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