As a matter of fact, it has much serious crime in our life. A number of people believe that crimes and violence could be prevented by heavy punishment. In my opinion, I do not agree with this. Because it's too cruel and maybe we'll have solutions better.
I agree that punishment is a way to avoid the rate of the offender to be increase and secure safety of our life. However, with some peoples, they think it's too ruthless. Because we are the human who has mind and emotion. We live to give mutual the love, so, this solution looks like we are the beasts haven't humanity. And have you ever thought the reason why he or she choose the wrong way? Cause all of us have the personal problem: financial, family... that led them to become an offender. Therefore, we should have new solutions is better to help them come back to be a good citizen.
How do you think about when a prisoner to be a good man? That's great, right? So, if they want to be a good man and it is true, we should forgive them, judge them an opportunity to change and try to solve their problem they have with their effort and social endorsement. The police should be well-trained and bravery to secure the safe social. The government should make a deterrent against any ideas of committing crimes by-laws should be implemented and executed in the most way that does not let the criminal a chance to heinous actions. Especially, education needs to be strengthened to heighten people's intellect. It's a good way to develop the humanity.
In conclusion, I believe that we always have the good way to solve the illegality more safety than capital punishment. Thank it, we can build a civilized society and safe to live
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