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There are many different opinions on the best way to reduce crime. The traditional solution is that increasing number of police department sizes generally prove to be an effective way to avoid people from commiting crime. An another solution is to against criminal’s motive such as property, revenge, etc in order to prevent them from doing illegal action. I completely agree with both opinions because of these reasons.

People in favour of having more police on the street argue that increasing number of police officers impact on crime rate effectively, particularly going down. Potential crime should be fear of huge amount of cops who are always ready to enforce the law and deter people from convicting a criminal. Additionally, people are less worried about crime cause of the presence of police on the street. Citizens are happy and feel safe when they live in a city with high supplies on security

                On the other hand, people believe that a better way to reduce crime is trying to prevent crime from the first place. Occurrences of offences depend on criminals’s motive and lack of education opportunities. By making sure that citizen’s property is protected carefully and the gorvement have policies to improve the living conditions for the poorer one, people have no reason to commit crime. Additionally, people who is given more education opportunities have chance to approach high living condition. This due to a fact that they certainly stay away from criminal act.

                In conclusion, I believe that the two above solutions are considerably necessary for the citizens around the world
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There are many different opinions on the best way to reduce crime. The traditional solution is that Traditionally, increasing the number size of police department sizes generally proves to be an effective way to avoid keep people from committing crime. An another solution is to against reduce criminal’s motives such as property and revenge, etc in order to prevent them from doing illegal action. I completely agree with both opinions because of these the following reasons.


People in favour of having more police on the street argue that increasing the number of police officers impacts on crime rate effectively, particularly going bringing it down. Potential crime criminals should be fear of the huge amount of cops who are always ready to enforce the law and deter people from convicting committing a criminal crime. Additionally, people are less worried about crime cause of thanks to the presence of police on the street. Citizens are happy and feel safe when they live in a city with high supplies on security.


 

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On the other hand, people believe that a better way to reduce crime is trying to prevent crime from in the first place. Occurrences of offences depend on criminals’s motives and lack of education opportunities. By making sure that If citizens' property is protected carefully and the gorvements have policies to improve the living conditions for the poorer ones, people have no reason to commit crime. Additionally, people who is are given more education opportunities will have chance to approach high living condition. This is due to a the fact that they certainly stay away from criminal acts.

In conclusion, I believe that the two above solutions are considerably necessary for the citizens around the world.

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