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The chart illustrates the figure of people who read books at Burnaby Public Library between 2011 and 2014.

At the first glance is clear that both of Male and Female were increased in the time in over 2 years period. But after that the men sharply went down while the women continue suddenly grew up.

In 2011, Men had read a lot of books in library total up to 5000 , during women just reached 3000 the same time of period. Both of them trends remains increased for a period of 2 years. It can be seen that in 2012, there was sudden rose in the number of books read by female. While that, information on books had read by male have trends significantly went down.

Finally, Female catched up with Male into 2013 value 10000 on total number people who read a lot of books at burnaby public library and went on rapidly growth.The chart illustrates the figure of people who read books at Burnaby Public Library between 2011 and 2014.

At the first glance is clear that both of Male and Female were increased in the time in over 2 years period. But after that the men sharply went down while the women continue suddenly grew up.

In 2011, Men had read a lot of books in library total up to 5000 , during women just reached 3000 the same time of period. Both of them trends remains increased for a period of 2 years. It can be seen that in 2012, there was sudden rose in the number of books read by female. While that, information on books had read by male have trends significantly went down.

Finally, Female catched up with Male into 2013 value 10000 on total number people who read a lot of books at burnaby public library and went on rapidly growth.

The graph below shows the number of books read by men and women at Burnaby Public Library from 2011 to 2014.  Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The chart illustrates the figure number of people who read reading books split by gender at Burnaby Public Library between 2011 and 2014.

At the first glance is clear that Overall, it is clear that both of male and female were increased in the time in over 2 years period over the period 2 years. But after that the men sharply went down while the women continue suddenly grew up. the number of men went down sharply, while the figure of women grew suddenly in the same time

In 2011, Men had read a lot of books in library total up to 3000 5000 , during whereas women just reached 3000 5000 the same time of period. Both of them trends remains increased for a period of 2 years. It can be seen that in 2012, there was a sudden rose rise in the number of books read by female. While that, information on books had read by male have trends significantly went down significantly.

Finally, the number of female catched up with the figure of male into 2013 value at 10000 on in total number people who read a lot of books at burnaby public library and went on rapidly growth

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