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On the one hand, those who prefer vegetarianism believe that it is cruel and unethical to kill animals for food when vegetarian options are available. In fact, animals are sentient beings and therefore, they should not have to die to satisfy for dietary preference. Furthermore, a vegetarian diet is always healthier and much cheaper since it delivers complete nutrition and provides health benefits. In other words, this diet could provide all necessary vitamins, fats, and mineral, thus, improve one's heath.

However, it is widely noted that eating meat is a natural part of a cycle of life and meat is the most convenient source available. It is true that most plant food does not provide an adequate level of essential proteins to the human body which enhances the function of immune and nervous system. Additionally, there is nothing inherently cruel about raising animals for food and it is indispensable that the latter-day slaughter techniques have improved significantly to minimize the suffering of animals.

In conclusion, the benefits derived from the vegetable-only diet will not overshadow the merits of wholesome one. By examining and analyzing thoroughly, it is advisable for human to optimize the advantages of all kinds

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On the one hand, those who prefer vegetarianism believe that it is cruel and unethical to kill animals for food when vegetarian options are available. In fact, animals are sentient beings and therefore, they should not have to die to satisfy for dietary preference. Furthermore, a vegetarian diet is always healthier and much cheaper since it delivers complete nutrition and provides health benefits. In other words, this diet could provide all necessary vitamins, fats, and mineral, thus, improve one's heath. 

However, it is widely noted that eating meat is a natural part of a cycle of life and meat is the most convenient source available. It is true that most plant food does not provide an adequate level of essential proteins to the human body which enhances the function of immune and nervous system. Additionally, there is nothing inherently cruel about raising animals for food and it is indispensable that the latter-day slaughter techniques have improved significantly to minimize the suffering of animals. 

In conclusion, the benefits derived from the vegetable-only diet will not overshadow the merits of wholesome one. By examining and analyzing thoroughly, it is advisable for human to optimize the advantages of all kinds

 

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