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Since the world has changed at an amazingly fast speed which is now more and more modernized; therefore, the demand for every field of life is more and more sophisticated and innovative. Working and studying are not the exception as there is a brand-new awareness assessment based on practical skills rather than traditional ways such as from textbooks or theoretical foundations. This essay; however, will be focused on both merits and demerits of this inclination that can bring to everyone.
First and foremost, not every single person is able to stand that theoretical approach to knowledge, especially for extroverted ones and for those who are fascinated by real experiences. It is obvious that social skills to communicate with folks is likely to be comprehended easier by down-to-earth practices which cannot be taught thoroughly and precisely by books. Moreover, if acquisition is emphasized only on conventional sources may not equip enough for scholars due to the fact that theories are mere temporary and short-term valuable. For instance, IT students might learn formulas and other cyber lessons. Nevertheless, they seem to spend more than 70 per cent of their study schedules to practice with hands-on technology equipments to assist them in remembering the lectures which can be applied in real life (according to an article from The Guardian). 
On the other hand, this tendency of apprehending knowledge results in foreseeable stumbling blocks. In fact, youngsters may make use of these non-traditional methods to study by depending too much on the Internet and televisions to seek for lectures and exercises. As a consequence, this explains the reason why children refuse to such fundamental habit like reading books and newspapers, while these sources are undoubtedly essential for a certain occupations like lawyers and doctors. That is also true if acquisition of basic knowledge is not comparative as that of practical skills, students will lack some extend of mastery in specific fields.
In a nutshell, this kind of assessment including not only positive influences but also negative results at moderate level. In my point of view, I do subscribe to the idea that the society should go for using this method to gain knowledge since its benefits still overweight its counterpart.

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In the modern world, more and more emphasis is being replaced on the acquisition of practical skills rather than knowledge from books and other resources.

 

In the modern world, more and more emphasis is being replaced on the acquisition of practical skills rather than knowledge from books and other resources.

 

In the modern world, more and more emphasis is being replaced on the acquisition of practical skills rather than knowledge from books and other resources.

 

In the modern world, more and more emphasis is being replaced on the acquisition of practical skills rather than knowledge from books and other resources.

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Câu hỏi là: Advantage and disadvantage of this trend. Vì chỗ ghi chỉ max 200 kí tự nên mình không viết hết ra được, mong bạn thông cảm và chữa cho giùm mình với
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Since the world has changed at an amazingly fast speed which is now and become (change và become dùng ở thì present perfect) more and more modernized; therefore (since và therefore đồng nghĩa nhau), the demand for every field of life is more and more sophisticated and innovative unprecedented. Working and studying are not no the exception as there is a brand-new awareness assessment based on practical skills rather than traditional theoretical ways such as from textbooks or  foundations. This essay, however, will be focused on both merits and demerits upside and downside of this inclination that can bring happen to everyone. ,

 

First and foremost, not every single person is able to stand that cope with the theoretical approach to knowledge, especially for extroverted ones and for those who are fascinated by real experiences. It is obvious that the social skills to communicate with folks others is likely to be comprehended easier more easily by down-to-earth practices which cannot be taught thoroughly and precisely by books. Moreover, if acquisition is emphasized only on conventional sources methods, it may not equip enough for scholars due to the fact that theories are merely temporary and short-term values. For instance, IT students might learn formulas and other cyber lessons. Nevertheless, they seem to spend more than 70 per cent of their study schedules to practicing with hands-on technology equipments to assist them in remembering the lectures which can be applied in real life (according to an article from The Guardian).  
 

 

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