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Face to face communication will become a thing of the past. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

There are several reasons why face to face communication will become a thing of the past as will now be discussed. 

Firstly, technology has had an impact on relationships in business. Technologic modern devices is more and more common with people such as laptop, tablet, smart phone and so on. Those devices and internet allow business people in different cities or countries to interact without ever meeting each other. This help them to save much time. Nowadays, all companies also use email as formal and popular communication way. 

Secondly, services like Skype, Zalo…create new possibilities for relationships between students and teachers. For example, a student can learn English with his teacher through internet instead of leave his house to take part in English class. Besides, teachers can upload educational documents on internet to students download them.

In conclusion, the internet and text messaging have certainly revolutionized communication between people. This results in some positive reason.

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There are several reasons why face to face communication will become a thing of the past as will now be discussed.  

Firstly, technology has had an impact on relationships in business. Technologic modern devices is more and more common with people such as laptop, tablet, smart phone and so on. Those devices and internet allow business people in different cities or countries to interact without ever meeting each other. This help them to save much time. Nowadays, all companies also use email as formal and popular communication way.  

Secondly, services like Skype, Zalo…create new possibilities for relationships between students and teachers. For example, a student can learn English with his teacher through internet instead of leave his house to take part in English class. Besides, teachers can upload educational documents on internet to students download them. 

In conclusion, the internet and text messaging have certainly revolutionized communication between people. This results in some positive reason.

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Đúng là mình bị sai Technologic modern devices.

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1. It should be "technologically modern devices are more and more common such as laptops, tablets, smart phones and so on."


2. It should be "These devices and the internet allow businessmen in different cities to interact without meeting each other"

3. It should be "This helps them save a lot of time. Nowadays, all companies use email as a formal and casual method of communication."

4. It should be "Secondly, services like Skype and Zalo create new possibilities for relationships between students and teachers."

5. It should be "For example, a student can learn English with there teacher through the internet without leaving there house. In addition, teachers can upload educational documents for students to download and use"

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