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The pie chart shows data about how many people rented volumes in Malton town libraby in 2009 .

Overall, there were a significant fluctuation in the number of books in 12 months of 2009. The figure was at its highest in december , whereas it was at its record low in february .

In the first month of that year , the number of books rented stood at 10 and reduced to reach at almost one-second of its in the second month . Three months later , the figure increased considerably to peak at 15 and then it remained stable until it peaked at 20 .

In the september , this upward trend was suddenly broken to 12 . In the next 3 months period , the number oscillated gradually . December became the highest rise at 21 .

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The pie chart The bar graph illustrates clearly the number of books rented in Malton Town's library, UK during the year of 2009.

Overall, the demand for renting increased gradually throughout the whole year. By the end of December, the number of documents recorded was a little more than twice as many as that of the beginning of the year. The figure was also at its peak in December with 21.

February was  the month when people rented fewest books with only 6 volumes recorded. After that, the charts increased gradually and peaked again in August with 20 books. The figure witnessed two significant decline in February and September, when the number dropped nearly a half.

From October to the end of the year, the graph stabilized roughly 10 books per month but increased dramatically in December.

I think you should focus more on comparing and pointing out the uniqueness of the figure instead of listing out the numbers. And this is not a pie chart

 

 

 

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