My name is Duc. I am currently a student(an undergraduate sẽ hay hơn) at National Economics University.I am from Bac Ninh city. (không cần, nghe mất tự nhiên không giống với văn phong người bản địa)
My hobbies are travelling, watching films and listening to music.
First of all, I like travelling a lot because it makes me comfortable and get to kick back??. I extremely enjoy beautiful sceneries. Also(Besides), I am addicted to travel to secret places. Acctualy(Actually), I always swear to myself that I must hitch my wagons to a star and traveling the globe will be my desire. However, my parents don’t say eye to eye with me. They convinced me that traveling the globe is very dangerous for adults. In the contrast, I believe I might hit a home run when persuading them to agree. I like to go travelling with my friends. My close friends always play an important role in my visits. Anyway, they also might help me solve lots of difficult situations.
Secondly, I’m(I am không bao giờ dùng contraction trong writing) into watching films. I am a big fan of romantic films. My favorite film is You are the apple of my eyeS . It is very interesting. Besides( trên có Besides rồi nên chỗ này dùng Furthermore), I have been into costume dramas since I was a child. I am always attracted by beautiful actors. Moreover, I often go to the cinema to watch blockbusters once a week.
In my free time time, I am interested in music the most. Because, listening to music, I feel very peaceful. It (helps dùng nhiều rồi nên có synonyms khác)benefits me forget tiredness in my life. I’m(I am) fascinated by classical music, especially classical songs such as I do, You raise me up. It doesn’t( does not) make me very popular with most of my friends. Their taste in music is completely different from mine. On the other hand, I also take up a musical intrusment. I’d love to be capable of playing the guitar but once in a blue moon I have a long free time.
In sum, everyone need to kick back( do not use phrasal verbs in essay) after tiring works or study and I believe that our hobbies help us to do.