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Let's write a passage to tell about one of your most favourite films

I am a big fan of china's film, especially historical films. China has became popular country in the world by the thickness history. There are many popular historical films which they were made in China such as: Three Kingdoms , All Men are Brothers, Journey to the West …). However, The film I was most impressed is Three Kingdoms. It is a timeless master peace that was made by La Quan Trung. The content of film is to talk about battles among three kingdoms: Nguy, Thuc, Ngo.

I can't determine the main character in that film. But, There are three actors that they are the most emphatic through the film including: Luu Bi, Quan Van Truong, Chuong Phi. They made friends at peach garden and building up the Thuc kingdom. Luu Bi who led the Thuc kingdom is humane person and treading talent well. Therefore, He recruited many pre-eminient hero who helped him achieve the throne composing of: Gia Cat Luong, Bang Thong, Trieu Tu Long, etc...

Quan Van Truong is very keen on and good at military but he is so haughty and too confident for himself. Chuong Phi is not clever as Quan Van Truong but he is so warlike, brave and strong.

Tao Thao who was know as genius for military is Nguy's king. However, He is such sceptical person that he have to see the worst failures of the battle of red cliff.

The Ngo's King is Ton Quyen. He was became the leader of Ngo at three years of age so his brother who were owning the country died in the battle with Nguy. Although He is so young to shoulder the responsibility for state, he has built powerful DongNgo kingdom to against the enemy.

In the film, I was most impressed in talent of Gia Cat Luong who has big credits for building Thuc kingdom and is the most intelligent person that I know. He was born and grew up in the traditional learning family. There are many famous battles in the film which they made the great name and age of his such as: the battle of red cliff, Go van doc, etc... Gia Cat Luong always make embarrassiment to enemies when they confront his at the theatre of war. In the battle of red cliff, He shown his own astronomy talent in the way accurately predicted the west wind to help ChuDu burn up hundreds of warships of Tao Thao and wining the glorious victory. He was also known who is the first person making the wheelbarrow. After LuuBi died, He play a vital role in the Thuc dynasty and continuously shoulder free northern career of Luu Bi. He made many mistakes in using people although he is very intelligent in making strategy. In the battle with Tao, he putted Tao's army to their trumps but Tao's army were save by the god and after he died of illeness at 52 years of age. Although He is a genius, if he was gave to birth at other time will be more good for him.

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1: China has became popular country in the world by the thickness history nên sử dụng thì hiện tại hoàn thành dạng bị động

2: … nên thay là etc mang nghĩa là v..v

3 nên sử dụng that trong câu này The film I was most impressed is Three Kingdoms. thế thôi còn lại mình chịu

I am a big fan of china's film, especially historical films. China has became popular country in the world by the thickness history. There are many popular historical films which they were made in China such as: Three Kingdoms , All Men are Brothers, Journey to the West …). However, The film I was most impressed is Three Kingdoms. It is a timeless master peace that was made by La Quan Trung. The content of film is to talk about battles among three kingdoms: Nguy, Thuc, Ngo.

I can't determine the main character in that film. But, There are three actors that they are the most emphatic through the film including: Luu Bi, Quan Van Truong, Chuong Phi. They made friends at peach garden and building up the Thuc kingdom. Luu Bi who led the Thuc kingdom is humane person and treading talent well. Therefore, He recruited many pre-eminient hero who helped him achieve the throne composing of: Gia Cat Luong, Bang Thong, Trieu Tu Long, etc...

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