Mình xin phép nêu lên ý kiến của mình về MB và KB nhé:
‘’How do celebrities become famous?’’. That question has become a source of controversy over in the world. The rational of this question is less clear and dependent on individual opinion. The most answers received are by their glamour, wealth and a lot kind of scandals to increase bad influence on young generation. Based on experience, I definitely agree with them. There are two reasons for my perspective on this => mình thấy MB này dài, không rõ ràng, không ăn khớp với những gì bạn viết ở TB, bạn có thể tham khảo MB này:
It is widely argued that nowadays celebrities are better known for their beauty and luxurious lifestyles than their accomplishment. While I accept that some of them set a bad example for youngsters, I believe that others act as positive role models.
In conclusion, everything is ‘’easy come easy go”. Only when one works so hard, does one get what one wants. I recommend all celebrity‘s fan to separate their good stuffs to study and bad stuffs to avoid => trước khi recommend bạn nên tóm tắt lại nội dung bài viết nhé:
In conclusion, it seems to me that celebrities have both positive and negative influence on young people. I recommend that all celebrities' fan should...