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This is a graph mentions about the birth rates of China and the USA between 1920 and 2000. => The line graph gives infomation about the fertility rates of China and the USA between 1920 and 2000.
Overall, the trends in the birth rates were similar in term of general change. => Ý bạn là in terms of : về mặt nào đó hay in term of: trong thời hạn?
It both decreased in the period of 80 years but the birth rate (bỏ s vì chỉ có the USA) of the USA was higher than that of China in most years.
During 15 years since 1920, the birth rate (bỏ s) in China fluctuated in range (bỏ s) from 10% to 15%. However, there was a sudden fluctuation over 45 years later. The birth rate (bỏ s) of China dived => decreased dramatically from 15% to 5% from 1935 to 1940. It => The figure for Chinese live birth leveled off for 5 years later and improved => rised from 5% to 20% over the next 5 years. Moreover, between 1950 and 1980, it has a sharp declined from 20% to 2,5%, and then varied for 20 years later. In the year 2000 (sử dụng cụm này ăn điểm hơn), the birth rate (bỏ s) of China was 2%.
In the same time => Over the period given, the birth rate of the USA wasn’t bigger => higher than that in China. From 1920 to 1940, it fluctuated in => by 12% before plummeting in next 5 years => in the following five years. (con số dưới 10 phải viết bằng chữ). After that, the birth rates recovered quickly from 5% to 15% for 10 years later. In the last 50 years, the general trend was fell ?? and in 2000, the birth rates of USA was 7%.