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Study alone and study in group both have its own advantage. Personally, i believe tht sometimes students need to be alone to get things done, but it is usually better when studying in a group.

On the one hand, it can be argued that there are undeniable benefits of studying alone. First, being alone help us concentrate better. WHen revising for an exam, memorising information is one of the most important part. Apparently, study without distractions is better in that case. Second, it is a good way to become independent, students have to brainstorm to finish their task on their own. Third, they can learn at their own pace which is not influenced by others.

On the other hand, some people believe that study in group brings them more benefits. First, it is obvious that two heads are better than one. The more people there are, the more ideas they can come up with, especially in research project which needs cooperation to handle. Second, student can learn new things from teammates when sharing knowledge. Third, motivation is created by working in a group. Being part of a group means students have resonsibility for their duty, and there is also a sense of competition among members. Therefore, these above reasons motivate them to study and work effectively.

In conclusion, These two way of study are suitable for different purposes. However, it seems to me that study in group is better.

A/c đọc bài rồi cho e hỏi là những chỗ e dùng "study' và 'studying' có vấn đề gì k ạ. Em cảm ơn rất nhiều ạ.
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studying nhe ban :-)

study alone and study in the group both have its own advantage. Personally, I believe that sometimes students need to be alone to get things done, but it is usually better when studying in a group.

On the one hand, it can be argued that there are undeniable benefits of studying alone. First, being alone help us concentrate better. When revising for an exam, memorising information is one of the most important part. Apparently, study without distractions is better in that case. Second, it is a good way to become independent, students have to brainstorm to finish their task on their own. Third, they can learn at their own pace which is not influenced by others.

On the other hand, some people believe that study in group brings them more benefits. First, it is obvious that two heads are better than one. The more people there are, the more ideas they can come up with, especially in research project which needs cooperation to handle. Second, student can learn new things from teammates when sharing knowledge. Third, motivation is created by working in a group. Being part of a group means students have responsibility for their duty, and there is also a sense of competition among members. Therefore, these above reasons motivate them to study and work effectively.

In conclusion, These two way of study are suitable for different purposes. However, it seems to me that study in group is better.

Theo bạn, bài viết này được bao nhiêu "chấm" ?
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cảm ơn c. c có nhìn thấy vấn đề gì nữa k?
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- Bạn paraphrase lại các study alone (self-education/ self-taught/ self-directed / learning without mentors) và study in group (group study/collaboration/cooperation) khi viết introduction nhé

- Các lỗi ngữ pháp mà mình thấy đc là

First, being alone helps us concentrate better

memorising information is one of the most important parts.

two ways of study

- Các lỗi spelling nữa:

responsibility không phải resonsibility
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m cảm ơn ạ, những từ paraphrase c gợi ý rất hữu ích

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