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The night trip around Ha Noi with my friends last week was a strange experience that I can’t forget. Before night, I was really excited to prepare many necessary things such as clothes, umbrella, ... Our interesting trip lasted from 10pm to 6.30am when everybody was sleeping, street was very quiet and atmosphere was very fresh. It was completed different from noise and crowd at daytime. Moreover, there was a lot of things I experienced that I have never done before. It was such a strange feeling that this was the first time I had been sleepless with others and ridden bike all the night. In addition, we together sang loudly songs, played  fun games, enjoyed grilled corn, grilled sweet patotoes  at the Long Bien bridge and talk to together many valuable things. In short, not only did the trip bring me a lot of new experiences but also help me have a more closeknit friendship and better emotions to love life more.

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_can't =» can not (writing không đc viết tắ,)
_before that night.
_street=» streets.
_There were a lot of things
_I had never done before.
_strange feeling, this was the first time I was sleepless.
_We sang loudly together.
_The trip not only brought me a lot of new experiences, but also help me have more closeknit friendship...


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The night trip around Ha Noi with my friends last week was a strange experience that i can not forget.before that night,i was really excited to prepare many necessary things such as clothes,umbrella,.. Our interesting trip lasted from 10pm to 6.30 am. When everybody was sleeping ,the street was very quiet and atmosphere was very fresh. It was completely different from noise and crowd at daytime. Moreover, there were a lot of things i experienced that i have never done before. It was a strange feeling, this was the first time i had been sleepless with others and ridden bike all night. In addition, we sang loudly songs together,played fun games,enjoyed grilled corn,grilled sweet patotoes, at th L:ong Bien bridge and talk to together many available things. In short, not only did the trip bring me a lot of new experiences but also helped me have more closeknit friendship and better emotions to love life more
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