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Some places prefer bikes to cars for some reasons, while in other cities people tend to using ( tend + to V) cars in place of riding bicycles.
It is reasonable that people choose cars as the main means of transportation in daily life. Firstly, compared to other types of vehicles, cars are able to cover longer distances in shorter period of time and transport a more number of people. Not all of inhabitants (bỏ of ) study or work near their houses so that ( HOẶC DẤU PHẨY TRƯỚC "SO") the convenience of driving cars helps them cut down considerably amount of time every day.
Moreover, to city dwellers, cars are better option to avoid the contaminated air or cold climates when the temperature drops to near or below freezing in the winter (winters)
In terms of environment, bikes with no engines mean they cannot release dust, exhaust fumes or poisonous gas into the air, ( chấm phẩy trước therefore nhé ) therefore, riding bikes contributes to the objective of protecting and cleaning the atmosphere. Besides, cycling which is a cheap, sustainable and helpful form of transportation can be useful for the amelioration of health. The time when you ride bikes to the workplace can be considered doing exercises, which is especially suitable and convenient to busy people.
From my personal perspective, both choices also have pros and cons , and it depends on personal views as well as their conditions. However, I think that riding bikes brings a wide range of benefits which people are well-deserved ,to reap. It can not only help ( thiếu s) save the budget on transportation, but also cut ( thiếu s ) down emissions into environment.
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