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Topic: The use of nuclear power has become common in many countries. What are the advantages? What are the disadvantages?

 

The invention of nuclear power has been considered a major breakthrough over the last decade. Comprehending the pros and cons of this atomic energy source can help human utilize it in a more informed, cautious and effective manner.

The popularity of using nuclear power recently is due to its undeniable convenience. Compared to other sources of energy, for instance fossil fuel, nuclear power emits the least carbon dioxide which is a main cause of global warming. It is estimated by the scientists that a power plant will most likely emit about 1000 grams of charcoals, or 350 grams of burning gas to produce a kilowatt-hour of electricity, yet only about 120 grams of nuclear power for the same purpose. Besides, another advantage of nuclear power is its stability under various conditions of weather. Unlike in eolic or solar energy producing, natural factors like wind or the sun cannot affect the atomic power production.

Nonetheless, the use of nuclear energy is still a great risk for any exploiters, as the Chernobyl and Fukushima accidents have proved. Radioactivity takes plenty of years to be completely eliminated. In addition, countries all over the world - by making use of this atomic power frequently - have raised the concern of nuclear weapons abuse. Within the passed twenty years, international collaboration has been implemented to resolve the issues of "nukes" in North Korea and Iraq, in an attempt to shelter the world from wars as well as disastrous healthcare consequences.

In conclusion, nuclear power includes both advantages and disadvantages. Mankind while exerting to master nuclear power manufacturing need to keep a cautious attitude towards this powerful source of energy.

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-The invention of nuclear power has been considered to be a major breakthrough over the last decade.

-... help human utilize it in a more informed, cautious and effective method.

-The popularity of using nuclear power recently has been due to its undeniable convenience.

-It is estimated by the scientists that a power plant will be most likely to emit.

-...yet only about 120 grams of nuclear power are used for the same purpose.

-Unlike in eolic or solar energy production, natural factors like wind or the sun cannot affect the atomic power manufacture.

-Nonetheless, the use of nuclear energy is still a great risk for most exploiters; for instance, the Chernobyl and Fukushima accidents.

-In addition, an increasing number of countries make use of this atomic power frequently; as a result, there has been a rapid rise in the concern of nuclear weapons abuse.

-Over the past twenty years,international collaboratio has been implemented to resolve the issues of "nukes" in North Korea and Iraq, in an attempt to prevent the world from wars as well as disastrous healthcare consequences.

-while taking advantage of nuclear power , mankind need to keep a cautious attitude towards this powerful source of energy.

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