Nowadays, the media has been developed [has developed] a lot so there are different ways to get information and take entertainment. Most of people [most people] enjoy watching TV, surfing the Internet, listening to the radio, but for me, reading books has the most benefits and no disadvantages.
Firstly, reading books widens our knowledge. The information in books is unlimited like a deep ocean, we can’t [avoid abbreviation] read all of [all] the books in this world even though we spend our entire life reading them. There are many genres of books for us to read and get information such as sci-fi, romance, adventure, or even textbook. I like detective novels, they give my brain a serious workout and take my mind out of my problems for a while. The more books we read, the more we know.
Secondly, reading books improves our writing skills. In my opinion, our favorite authors’s [authors’] writing style can affect on [no preposition] our writing style. For an English learner like me, reading English books is necessary because it not only helps me knowing [know] more about the mentioned country’s culture, but also gives me a chance to learn new vocabulary.
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