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1. You wrote: Nowadays, the enviroment of our school is getting more and more pollute,.... ( enviroment -> environment ; pollute -> polluted)
2. You wrote: the classrooms should be cleaned every day by not eating or making too many litters at chool. (chool -> school)
3.You wrote: Morever, planting more trees help us to respiratory benefit and limit air pollution. (Morever -> Moreover)
4. You wrote: In clusion, these ways bring us manu benefit becaus it is not only protect enviroment of school but only make us to become more healthy. ( In clusion -> in conclusion; manu -> many; benefit -> benefits; it is not only protect -> is not only protected ; to become -> become)