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write about the advantages of an alternative energy which you think the most potential

Solar energy which is one alternative source has become extremely common these days thanks to the numerous advantages it brings people.The most important benefit of solar energy is provding electricity for people.It is really useful for many countries to use for their daily life such as industry, in country and so on with affordable cost.Moreover,the sun releases large amounts of energy every day.Thus,this energy con creat solar pannels on the roofs of houses which provides enough energy to heat  cool an entire house . It is more economical  to use than air-conditinoners or heat,cool services.Last but not least,what makes solar energy become indispensible is not only plentiful and infinite but also clean and safe.Hence,the humman race don not worry about how to make full use of these sources.It a nutshell,solar energy is extremly necessary to the survival of all humanity

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Solar energy which is one alternative source has become extremely common these days nowadaysthanks Thank to the numerous advantages it brings people.The most important benefit of solar energy is provding providing electricity for people.It is really useful for many countries to use for their daily life such as industry, in country and so on with affordable cost.Moreover,the sun releases large amounts of energy every day. Thus,this energy con creat is used for make solar pannels on the roofs of houses which provides enough energy to heat  cool an entire house . It is more economical  to use than air-conditinoners or heat,cool services.Last but not least,what makes solar energy become indispensible indispensable is not only plentiful and infinite but also clean and safe. Hence,the humman race don not don't worry about how to make full use of these sources.It a nutshell, solar energy is extremly  extremely necessary to the survival of all humanity (can use "human beings).

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