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Some people think universities should provide knowledge and skills related to a future career; others think the true function of a university is to give access to knowledge for its own sake. What is your opinion of the main function of a university?

 

Nowadays, some people argue that function of universities should concentrate on providing knowledge and skills for job-related. However, others think it should give to access deeper information about each major.  In my view, It depends on the purpose of students.

Universities pay attention in required companies. It will create students generation who can adapt to the workplace quickly and keep pace with real life. Moreover, the students can make competitive in the job market that it helps workers usually improve career prospects themselves to become qualified employees. That is the main point to boost economic development and increase income not only the person but also countries. In addition, they can earn a living and raise a family in a short time after they graduated.

Nevertheless, If whole universities teach catching abilities in working environment, so nobody will research or explorer new theoretical science or technologies that are transferred to upgrade and utilize in companies. Therefore, in a long term, everything will be backward and so our society will be faced with a struggling economy. For example, in agriculture have just applied old technology, then the land will be soil emaciation, then the quality and number of products will be decreased. Students won’t harbour any new thing to study. Thus governments should invest in science universities have good conditions not only environment but also finance to attract and encourage  intelligence students pay enough attention in their fields.

In conclusion, following above, two sides are as important as, but universities teach new knowledge and skills should be more than universities find down new information. 

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However, others think it should give to access deeper information about each major. => .... it should provide access to advanced information sources in specific majors.

Universities pay attention in required companies. => .. pay attention to most- wanted companies to work for.

It will create students generation who can adapt to the workplace quickly and keep pace with real life. => It will create graduates ...

Moreover, the students can make competitive in the job market that it helps workers usually improve career prospects themselves to become qualified employees. => the students can make job markets more competitive, which helps workers improve career prospects ....

That is the main point to boost economic development and increase income not only the person but also countries.  => not only for each individual but also for the country.

 

Nevertheless, If whole universities teach catching abilities in working environment, so nobody will research or explorer new theoretical science or technologies that are transferred to upgrade and utilize in companies.  => if whole universities taught catching abilities..., nobody would research or explore...

our society will be faced with a struggling economy => will face

For example, in agriculture have just applied old technology, then the land will be soil emaciation, then the quality and number of products will be decreased. => If agriculture industry applies...

Thus governments should invest in science universities have good conditions not only environment but also finance to attract and encourage  intelligence students pay enough attention in their fields. => having good conditions...envirionmentally.. financially ....intelligent.....attention to ..

In conclusion, following above, two sides are as important as, but universities teach new knowledge and skills should be more than universities find down new information. =? two functions are both important, but universities teaching ...should be more preferable.

 

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