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Decisions make great effects on one’s life. My most important decision I made  is to go oversea to study in the USA after graduated from high school. That led me to new interesting experiences and also new challenges.Going to developed countries to study is considered a worldwide trend. For me I chose the USA  because not only do they have one of the most advanced education systems but they also provide almost  necessary conditions to international students. Furthermore, I have 2 cousins living in the USA so I can totally focus on my studying without worrying about the accomodation. I really looked forwards to learning about the various cultures in this country.Maybe I would have some difficulties in communicating with the others at first but by practising with the native daily, my English skills l would be improved significantly, which is good for my future job’s requirement. I think I have made a good decision. I need to overcome all the challenges and never stop going forward to manipulate my chance here.
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Decisions make great effects on one’s life. My most important decision I made  is to go oversea to study in the USA after graduating from high school. That led me to know more new interesting experiences and also new challenges.Going to developed countries to study is considered a worldwide trend. For me I chose the USA  because not only do they have one of the most advanced education systems but they also provide almost  necessary studying conditions for international students. Furthermore, I have 2 cousins living in the USA so I can totally focus on my studying without worrying about the accomodation. I really looked forwards to learning about the various cultures in this country.Maybe I would have some difficulties in communicating with the others at first but by practising with the native daily, my English skills l would be improved significantly, which is good for my future job’s requirement. I think I have made a good decision. I need to overcome all the challenges and never stop going forward to manipulate my chance here.
 

 

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Decisions make great effects on one’s life. My most important decision I made  is to go oversea to study in the USA after graduating from high school. This led me to new interesting experiences and also new challenges.Going to developed countries to study is considered a worldwide trend. For me I chose the USA  because not only do they have one of the most advanced education systems but they also provide almost  necessary conditions for international students. Furthermore, I have 2 cousins living in the USA so I can totally focus on my studying without worrying about the accomodation. I really looked forwards to learning about the various cultures in this country.Maybe I would have some difficulties in communicating with the others at first but by practising with the native daily, my English skills l would be improved significantly, which is good for my future job’s requirement. I think I have made a good decision. I need to overcome all the challenges and never stop going forward to manipulate my chance here.

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